I really don't get it. A well to do woman meeting numerous men to be used anally and fuck faced or spit on and men to cum on and then sneak home naked, where is the thrill or what is the point? And what is with the coin?
You're reading BDSM erotica and you can't imagine someone getting a thrill from public group sex?
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Anonymous08/11/15
It might be better to say that you didn't convey a sense of excitement on the part of anyone involved. It was dry, almost clinical for such an event. She wants the degradation and humiliation but you didn't give us a picture of that inner turmoil. What about the guys? Are they ravenous beasts or just brave mice, able to be wild in this very controlled situation? You have the what part goes where. You're missing the why should we care about it?
It's about an attractive woman using her immense wealth and power to arrange her fantasy of group sex in public. Do you really need an inner monologue from the men to feel anything? If so, stay tuned, the sequel is coming soon.
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I really don't get it. A well to do woman meeting numerous men to be used anally and fuck faced or spit on and men to cum on and then sneak home naked, where is the thrill or what is the point? And what is with the coin?
Where is the thrill?
You're reading BDSM erotica and you can't imagine someone getting a thrill from public group sex?
It might be better to say that you didn't convey a sense of excitement on the part of anyone involved. It was dry, almost clinical for such an event. She wants the degradation and humiliation but you didn't give us a picture of that inner turmoil. What about the guys? Are they ravenous beasts or just brave mice, able to be wild in this very controlled situation? You have the what part goes where. You're missing the why should we care about it?
Why should you care?
It's about an attractive woman using her immense wealth and power to arrange her fantasy of group sex in public. Do you really need an inner monologue from the men to feel anything? If so, stay tuned, the sequel is coming soon.
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