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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/08/15

Miles?

I loved the story, but who is Miles? I thought Lavon was the main man. Copy and paste must be proofed.

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by darkknight0108/08/15

Anonymous "Miles" comment

Yes, I changed the name of Miles to Lavon. I thought I corrected every instance, I see now I missed a few. I hope this doesn't ruin the story for everyone.

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by sugareola08/09/15

Loved it!

Very sexy story with a cute ending. The spontaneous wild sex was so hot, gracious! Please keep 'em coming.

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by Anonymous08/10/15

Mmmmmmmmmmmmm

Very sexy. I loved the hot urgency in their fucking.

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by Anonymous08/16/15

Sexy and fun

Great story! So hot, intense and sweet.

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by Anonymous08/26/15

So jealous of a girl named Cloe

This is a very sexy read. Wish I had a Lavon of my own. ;)

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