Under The Bridge

Excellant!

Delicious Story Sir*

thank you Sir

i enjoyed this story immensly, it was extremely ummm... satisfying . i will be gently suggesting a certain someone reads it for inspiration. the way the tension built up between them, and the outdoor setting were great, but the best part was when he held her nose, and then slid down into her throat for the first time .... mmmmm memories... ty again

well done sir

Another wonderful story, as all yours tend to be, well done Sir

Rainbow_carnage

delightful

Very nice Sir Nathan... loved it, buttafly

very well done Sir

Excellent...loved it...and loved the way you kept it kind as well as erotic while embracing the spirit of your lifestyle. amanda

Breathless!!!

A nice tight story, well crafted, very erotic, well up to your usual standard, more please Sir N.

WOW!

Thanks for sharing a breathlessly wonderful tale! :O

Wow

This hit me with an intensity that I wasn't expecting.

good lord

that was fucking hot hot HOT!! but why woudl she trust you so quickly? do you just have that aura? I know a man that does, and he called me slut for a year, it made me cum just seeing it or hearing it spoken, damn good story Sir Nathan, very well done

xoxox--M ( a friend)

ch.2?

Will there be a CH. 2 to this GREAT tail?? Loved this one and hope to see another... I cant belivet the edge that it kept Me on... Great tail Man.. hope to see more.. from. M. Sand.

hehehe

'I am no fool'

hahaha, that you aren't

great piece!

nice...

fucking awesome.
you're god...

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Coughs...um...Chapter two, anyone? Pretty please? :-)

Fucking Straight

Now this is the way it should be done, period.

Superb tale

A first rate story. But I need more of the same.

yes, sir!

Sir,
You did a wonderful job with this story. I was reading it and got so turned on by it that I had to beg my Sir for his cock down my throat. Thank you!

~hoax

awsome!

More please Sir!

Inspiring

That was an amazing story....I would love to read chapter 2

Love it!

I really do love all of your BDSM submissions. Keep them coming, I masturbate to them every night!

mmm

mmmm yes please

burnin' hot

sir,what a thrilling tale.hopefully she'll be used again,and we'll get all those nasty details as well.thanks.

Tame the Flirt

Very hot, nice tempo, not too rushed.......just perfect.

mmmmmmmm

awesome sir :P
i need a master like him

Another amazing one!!!

WOW! WOW! WOW!! Totally amazing - I want to be her on that picnic table! This cunt is sogging wet, the clit so much in need of you ....!!!!

Great

This is a great story I hope you are going to continue with it.

thanks

wow! just what i needed to get off!

To the edge and back again. Love it, love it, love it. Please continue writing for us Sir Nathan.

Wow! That is all i have to say about Your work Sir_Nathan :)