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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Loving it

I really hope there is more chapters to come! Maybe slow things down with the plot and add a bit more detail, just a thought. Keep writing

mBrowmBrowover 8 years ago
Fine, Hot story!

Thanks!

Also,

plump lips all to (sic) too alluring

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
good story, but grammar/spelling distracting

I enjoyed the story...but found some of the grammatical errors and spelling errors distracting, but that's me....my daughter is worse...she considers herself a grammar nazi!

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I'm Tongan, Samoan and Portuguese. I'm a little, middle, rat, slut, switch, and pet (kitten). I identify as a kitten the most and am very primal in nature. I'm looking to meet like minded people who are into the same kink. I like to text base role-play because it helps with my...