How a Midget Stole My Wife Pt. 02

Wow

what a pile of crap! It takes a sick mind to write like this. Even if it's written strictly to piss people off, why? What idiot takes the time to write stories with the sole purpose of pissing off the people who read it?

And if he writes like this because it turned him on then he needs serious psychological help.

Not bad

The humiliation was a tad strong for my tastes, but still erotic. A stronger more fleshed out female character will greatly help for your next story.

Wow . Worst story ever

I thought i read a lot of bad stories here but u take the prize to be the worst of worst writers. You make most of the writers here look like shakespear . You must be a midget with ton of attitude and hatred or are a wife with a few bastards in tow.

The Humiliation.

The story proves that the man may be taller and strong but He does not stand a chance against a wife,who is intent on making Him her cuckold.

Hey Fucktard!

Humiliation is NOT erotic.This was just plain bad.

Almost humorous

This story is ridiculous. I think its meant to be though. You definitely stretched the realm of reality. The midget, the wife, the husband, all of those characters were so extreme that there is no way I can believe that you were trying to give us a heart warming tale of love and loss. This story sounds like the plot of bad fetish porn. I have to believe that this was your intention though.

Worst crap -

- Ever written here

Grade A Shit

Did I mention ... This was SHIT

Wacko

Another repressed gay fantasy. The only difference is that this one swirls directly down the toilet.

Author: just admit that you are gay and stop developing complex excuses for dreaming about licking up another man's cum. You'll be a happier person after you come out of the closet.

This story only could go down and down into a shit hole....

This story only could go down and down into a shit hole....As a midget fantasy, it's acceptable...But from a man that had the balls to rob millions from a big company, had the police and FBI looking for him, that's pure bullshit...The man capable of this would easily kill the midget!!! Killing the midget and hide his body was so much simpler that robbing the company!!! So I can conclude that this was written to "piss off" the readers...I think he will only "piss off" the midgets that read this...This is king of racism against them...1*

Midget with a big cock

and dear annony sucked it off. gave you a 5

Just perfect!

Love "May the best man win"-stories.

And... wow... what a life-altering, devastating knock-out by a hugely superior man!

More please! More about nasty underdogs like Shorty stealing hotties from their husbands!

Why?

He's capable of giving her heavenly pleasure with his wondrous cock.....

Yummy.

Dear anonymous

If you don't like a story, DON'T read it and stop insulting the author. Chapter 1 was pretty clear it was a cuckold story with lots of humiliation so why did you read chapter 2 which was the same thing? It's just stupid.
And why insult the author, you don't like it it's your right and you can tell the author that but the insults and "kill yourself" are useless. You feel all powerful hiding in front of your computer? Great for you, cowards, and I just want to say critics are easy, try and write a story and we'll see if you are any good.

And stealing money when you know you won't get caught is a lot much easier than killing someone. It's not because you stole money that you can kill someone, the psychology behind the two acts are totally different. So Peter not being able to kill Shorty makes sense.

As for the story, I thought it was lacking in sex. It would have been better if you had described the sex scenes more. Don't stop at "he is fucking her in the ass" and give us a great detailed description of the act.
The story line was good (maybe not realistic but who cares) and fun. The humiliation was great. The husband had no choice because he was facing prison and he just went deeper and deeper into the mess so we don't ask ourself "why is he going through this?" And I'm glad there wasn't a happy ending for the husband.

To give 1* without reading

@Miniwand You are right. Normal average men and women need not read cuck story, but they have to click to the end without reading to give 1*.
I diid according to this, without reading 1*.
The author sign to be cuck story we can give 1* quicklier.
I gave 5***** for the today non cuck story and I read that story "Mac and Chees".

Gave it a 5

I agree with one of the previous comments. I also enjoy the 'may the best man win' stories and hope to see more similar themed stories in the future. If you care about getting better ratings and/or comments you might want to post future ones in the fetish category. Otherwise, ignore the non-constructive trolls from the comment section. Keep up the good writing!

Puke all over this streaming pile of shit!!!!!

Trish is one sick cunt!!! EA

1

Noticed this was your first submission. Do us all a favor and make it your last.

fucking perfect. even better than the first part. one of the best I've ever read. I hope you keep writing more and ignore the morons who read stories that are clearly not intended for them and then bitch and moan about it.

See JasJon

Ditto Jasjon comment 1*

Dumb Dude

Story pretty much sucked. "He couldn't do anything" BS he could have found a way, he could still find a way. Of course the typical line about how she fell in love with Shorty (all because he was fucking her). Isn't it supposed to be falling in love first and the sex makes it better. Why alot of these stories have it the other way around. Anyway he's better off without her for quit a few reasons. He just being a dumb dude to stay around and put up with Shorty's crap.

Your A Worse Writer Than Me..

When I submitted my story several years ago most said it was badly written.. Well, you topped me from reading these comments.. Don't let it bother you.. do your critics have any submissions?

Jail would be better....

.....boy, you really screwed the pooch!
This kind of crap is guaranteed to raise the hackles on every self-respecting man in the known universe.
That was obviously your intent. Well met, my troublemaking comrade!
Now, I dare you to write the same story, but reverse the characters. Make her the felon and the neighbor a plain woman with a perfect physique that blackmails the neighbor couple in the same way....until she has completely subsumed him and is pregnant with his baby.
Let's see if you can stomach that and let's see what the crowd thinks of it.

I bet you won't do it. Yup, this is an obvious taunt, but it is sincere.

Look at the name of the author

Obviously the author wants to humiliate, rather than be humiliated. The author is a woman

Fucking BULLSHIT!! Midgets can die just as easy if not easier than normal sized folks!!

The writing was average but the premise/subject matter was insane bullshit. If that guy can walk off with tons of loot from the business he basically ran into the ground, he damn sure can get that lil' fucker whacked in some easy, non-trackable way.

A depraved midget named trish2k...

thinks his readers are as dumb as him by offering such a crap.

Just pure garbage.

This was..

Bollocks.

Fantastic!

Please let's have more of Shorty.Years ago a man who was pretty much a midget exposed himself to mw in a public washroom. Bigger than average cock. I just stood there, almost hypnotized and just stared. He just grinned and looked me in the eye. Smirking little man. I never forgot it. This story bring it all back. I need more!

Like it a lot

Agree with the people who appreciate the fact that ths story has a clear winner. Too many stories leave you hanging: who'll claim her for good?

Shorty is a true alpha. He totally outperforms the storyteller and easily wins his lovely wife.

Yes, the sex could have been more graphic.

But else: go go Shorty! More about "losers" turning out to be pleasure-giving bulls!

Even thought the execution and the ending are bit lacking, I think the concept is interesting. given this is your first work, I say job well done.

Please don't think much about the negative comments. If you are going to publish stories in this category, you need a very, very thick skin. It takes courage to come up with a story line like this and post as your first work in LW: the shark tank of literotica.

It's amazing how some people fail to realize that this is just a story and comment as if they had witnessed a real life event; in a way, it's a win for the author.

Please don't take your personal frustrations out on the author. If you get worked-up because you don't agree with the personality of a character in a fictional story, you need a reality check and help.

Loved it !! But please give the wife' POV also!!

Poor

Shorty disappears one day, body never found. Everybody has a snapping point and raping the wife is it.

Too easy.

Make up a story about a quadriplegic stealing another man's wife. Or even more challenging, a story about a guy in a coma stealing another man's wife!

Wow

Could of made him get revenge another wasted story

Great Score!!

Magnificent 2.75 score! I'm sure with many more years of hard work you might make it to 3.

hello bro

Well its your story truth or lie but i thing its batter man you chose jail but not that type of humiliation what a man have his pride his honor his respect when this all go what for live i like these say Death before dishonor

hello bro

Well its your story truth or lie but i thing its batter man you chose jail but not that type of humiliation what a man have his pride his honor his respect when this all go what for live i like these say Death before dishonor

hello all

Well its your story truth or lie but i thing its batter man you chose jail but not that type of humiliation what a man have his pride his honor his respect when this all go what for live i like these say Death before dishonor

Very well written,but I fucking hate it.

Your story might make for a really good porn movie,but is a really bad read. It's very realistic--in the sense that once you give in once you keep giving in until you don't know how to fight back anymore. And it's actually good in that sense. But as fiction(I dunno,if it's real,call me, I wanna literally eat Shorty alive(the way I eat a steak),starting from the feet. Or skin him alive and roll him in salt.) it's a failure. Come on, I'm a midget myself(yes, totally being honest) and I've only ever had girlfriends stolen from me and having their new boyfriends kicking me verbally or physically(or both) in the nuts at the same time(oh,I did avenge myself on those fuckers and bitches....it was rather painful for them).

continuation of the story in the second cycle

I'd love to continue. Elf Carol used to develop their work and her life turns into hell. causes her to have sex with many men to death

good story. wished you would describe the sex scene in details, but still good nonetheless. the ending promotes mix feelings in audiences' heart...injustice towards the protagonist. I guess that's how you're suppose to feel when reading cuckold/humiliation stories.

1*

Why do we get so many scum new writers in this category? Don't we enough of you sewer rats already.

A big hot 5

Haters hate and wouldn't know a good story if it was explained to them. Five. One of the best.

1*

fag cuck shit.

1*

really.?

5*

Fantastic story by a great author.

Jim Carrey fan?

It looks like you just adapted the beginning of "Me, Myself, and Irene" into a full on story... lol

I would've liked the little man to fuck my ass out while I cried for mercy,

Lmao

I'd have killed the little fuck before I gave up my wife.

You deserved to get your wide taken if you can't even stand up to a little midget