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This is incredibly poorly written. Get an experienced editor. Your prose reads like a laundry list. The story could work, but...
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This story brings a whole new meaning to the word BAD
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Are you going to add chapter 4 if so when?
Not bad.
It's a pretty good story, can't wait for a chapter four.
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