All Comments on 'Erin Obeys'

. . . description of the oral sex, and the imagery is very good (as in the bits with the nipple-play).

The Erin of this story is extremely close in description to the Erin that is my partner. Although she's not moody or does she scowl at me at suggestions, her reactions are exactly as you described. We read this together and enjoyed it very much. Thank you for your submission.

The descriptions used are very detailed and satisfying. However, I am left to wonder how and why "the device" works. How did Erin switch from total contempt for our main character to eagerly awaiting their next session? How did Erin come to wear "the device" in the first place?

More data needed...

nice story

Paragraph 22 you have her shaking her head yes. People shake their head no. They nod their head yes.