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A beautiful canvas
You paint lovely, sensuous pictures with your precise use of words: in my mind, the words bring up images of very delicate flowers, though not desert ones; something like a mimosa, rather incongruous with the desert canvas - but perhaps what you intended? ~AN
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My description of the flower is actually very imprecise. But I think that it is perfect that your imagination provides you with an image of a flower that one would not expect in the desert. The love that I wish to describe is exotic and improbable, yet vibrant and cherished.
How very lovely...
...I visited this a few times before leaving my comment, you have created a fine example of a sonnet. I really do hope the dry spell does not last too long for you.
You have inspired me...I feel a sonnet coming on.
A DIFFICULT CHOICE
your date of the splendor of the view. TK U MLJ LV NV
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