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by Anonymous10/11/04

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all know there is no
capital in "the"

it is one hunger

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by Anonymous09/14/05

Oh my...

Submission never sounded so sweet and there's nothing better than a good tease in a poem. Well, there are better teases... Uhmm... I digress. Good poem.

average gina

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