Thanks a lot for the good feedback so far. In honesty I normally write much longer stories but I only just recently started writing on this site and wasn't sure how long is too long for most people. I was planning to test that out with my next one.
I suppose I could see a part two to this one. It was my first time writing mother incest and I was surprised how enjoyable I found it. Normally I'm just daddy/daughter or daddy/son all the way. :)
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Loved the story. Just wish it was longer. Can there be a part two in the future?
Too rushed
Everything happened too fast. No build-up.
Thanks for the feedback!
Thanks a lot for the good feedback so far. In honesty I normally write much longer stories but I only just recently started writing on this site and wasn't sure how long is too long for most people. I was planning to test that out with my next one.
I suppose I could see a part two to this one. It was my first time writing mother incest and I was surprised how enjoyable I found it. Normally I'm just daddy/daughter or daddy/son all the way. :)
Great story
Great story, now we need further chapters from you about his love of family.
awesome
great premise, hot sex, short and sweet. thank you.
Great Start
Please write more . Thank you for your writings.
A little short.
Short but pretty hot.
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