by tallone123
Thank you -- five stars.
is measurements. So I stopped reading and gave it one star.
Good start to a great story line. I am sure you can do many more chapters and maybe even get some other couples from there work place into the story.
Great start looking for the next chapter soon!
Great source to make a sequel
more please
your name isn't Giles?
I love the language different but cool. Thanks for sharing.