All Comments on 'Lovely Linda'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
A delightful story!

Thank you -- five stars.

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 8 years ago
The first para

is measurements. So I stopped reading and gave it one star.

kingswedekingswedeover 8 years ago
Good Start

Good start to a great story line. I am sure you can do many more chapters and maybe even get some other couples from there work place into the story.

ChrissrChrissrover 8 years ago
Excellent

Great start looking for the next chapter soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
waiting for next chapter

Great source to make a sequel

mammoetmammoetover 8 years ago
great

more please

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Scotsman69, you sure

your name isn't Giles?

chytownchytownover 8 years ago
Good Read*****

I love the language different but cool. Thanks for sharing.

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