Sister in Heat Ch. 01

Nice !

Incredible story !
Best I've ever read !!!!!!!!!!!!

Amazing

What a sister... :)
Very good story!

Nice!!

Thanks for sharing.

Not Bad

For most of the story the brother was so dumb, she was so obvious and he is so clueless.

This sooo hot!

This one of the hottest tale I have ever read. Well done!

Great start

I am so looking forward to more of this one

So many things you can put in this now, bondage, force, public, mum and dad?
But please no sharing. In family OK, just not with mates or outsiders.

You have a gift...

One of the best developed tales I,ve had the pleasure to read here in some time. PLEASE continue!!

Very well written and enjoyable. Well done.

yup, you have a gift.

Really hot. The sex scenes were rough and perfect. Please keep it between these two. They are a great story.

Sexy

Loved the hairs on Johnny's abdomen and chest!

Hot

This was one hot story. You definitely have a very vivid imagination. The sex scenes were great! Keep writing.

good story

There's an obvious solution for any sister in heat. It's jumping around in her brother's pants.

What a wonderful brother-sister sex story !! HOT exciting and great dialogue from his baby sister :) Please write more and maybe they can move in together and really bang each other silly ?? Thank you.

So wonderfu...

...lly Dirty. I wanted him to cum on her face and then share it in a deep dirty kiss. I hope you will write more stories.

Jay Richards

Very wellllllllllllllllllllllll done!

HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Masterful!

Wow. This one goes in my top 5 stories. Just EXCELLENT!!!!! Thank you!

I need more!

Give us more! We need more!

Where is the Six?

I gave this story a five only because there is no six. Awesome. Reluctance, insistence, passion, possibility of being caught, awareness of all the difficulties and a well described session. Thank you.

I wish I could rate this more.

This has to be one of the best stories I've read, I mean OH MY GOD that was so fucking hawt!!!!

More please

Dude...don't make us wait to long for chapter 2 of this story.

Amazing

Amazing when is chapter 2 gonna come out

On its way

Thanks for reading! There is a Chapter 2 in the works. Can't guarantee when but hopefully sometime in September.

How do I meet your sister

Loved your story
Great story you gotta keep this one going.
I know how you feel, drained
Just tell me where to meet your sister, and I would be very very, very happy to keep her busy so you could get some very well needed rest.
But. don't worry when she tires my out, you could take over, till your tired.
Then I'd pick up where you left off. Great plan, wad da say?
thanks

This story is my favorite I've read so far. My boyfriend and I check back every day for Ch. 02!

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"Take me, John-"

My fingers bit into the skin of her ass, and then she was grinding, her shorts riding up. She cried out-

"Whoa! No!" We flew apart like we'd been hit by a car and I raised my hands up above my head. "Okay, no. Whoa."

Her lip was bleeding, and she looked at me with an expression equal parts despair and anger. And then she ran.

@@@ You sir, are a fucktard inconsiderate bastard of a brother. If your needy sister on the edge of a breakdown begs you to fuck her, you FUCK HER! Dumbass. Lol. @@@

Monica brushed the hair out of her face and swallowed hard. "I didn't mean that...what I said. I don't want you to-"

@@@ ...Oh, but she does... But rejection and embarrassment kinda suck... @@@

This isn't something that can ever be undone." Sounds valiant, doesn't it? But my voice was breaking and my cock was rigid. Pressed into her waist, she was well aware.

@@@ They seem to ALWAYS write this shit in stories, the funny part is that the guy would never say that shit, lol. Always the girl wanting to fuck him, him acting all shocked and goody-goody parentish reluctant. Yeah right. Any brother I know would have kindly offered to be the sleeping stiff (heh) and general, all-around human fuck toy for his needy sister. Hell, I dont have a sister and now I fucking want one, lol! @@@
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It took a supreme act of will to extract myself from that beautiful mouth, but somehow I pulled it off. Monica let out a crushing little moan and reached for me, almost desperate to bring me back to her soft lips, but I rested my hand on her cheek and shook my head.

"If you want me as hard as your fantasy, you can't finish me yet." My cock pulsed impatiently, almost as desperate to return to her tongue as she was to drain me.

@@@ What?! He pulled out?! He's insanely stupid! Has this guy ever even been laid? He seems to have shit backwards, if she *doesnt* blow him now then he's going to go off like a geek virgin fucking the head cheerleader, lol. He is supposed to be Mr. MeLoveYouLongTime! not Mr. OopsWasItGoodForYouToo? Hehe @@@

As she got up I dabbed a sparkling bit of cum from the corner of her mouth, and she did the same for me.

@@@ cum? What cum? He never finished! Wtf? @@@

Maybe a part of me was doing this for purely altruistic reasons

@@@ Buhahaha!! @@@

She squeezed my bicep hungrily, and turned away.

@@@ its settled, after summer ends we're getting an apartment together till college is finished, then we're fucking moving out of state where nobody knows us, buying a house in the country, fucking like insatiable kinky wererabbits every day and living happily ever after. @@&

It was a good thing I did kegels, because I knew she wasn't going to make it easy for me.

@@@ ...funny thing is... I'd be absolutely perfect for this guys sister. It takes me forever to cum most of the time, unless Im having one of those rare in heat moments, and a lot of times I dont cum at all, just call it a night/morning when Im exhausted or my girl is too sore to continue. ...and laying on my back? Almost impossible... I dont know what it is but its really hard to cum on my back, even mastrubating. Strange, eh? My wifes girlfriends bitch because their guys are too quick and she bitches because I take too long, hehe. (Ive offered to swap occasionally but oddly she declined! ;) @@@

After many silly suggestions, she finally decided on "Lannister" (by far the silliest, and also soundest, choice).

@@@ how would you even remember that?! How about something simple and easy, like your last name? @@@

The fact that it would be mine - her unknowing, responsible older brother - well, at that point she lost the ability to type, slammed her computer closed and dashed upstairs. She told me later she'd started masturbating immediately after locking her door, and didn't stop until nearly midnight.

@@@ Gawd I want this girl. Right now! @@@

Johnny? Are you awake?" she whispered. She began to slide her hips around, rubbing the head of my cock against her wet pussy. "Big brother?" The head poked easily into her snatch. "Oh..." She sank it down, down until the head popped in. "Oh, God..."


@@@ The anticipation is killing me!! @@@

@@@ ...That was fucking ** awesome** :). Wow! I read it out loud to really enjoy it! @@@
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"Well, when I go to my real job, you're going to have to hide in here until mom and dad are gone."
"I know how it works, Johnny. Just let me stay here for now."

@@@ why cant she just sneak back to her room when he gets up, or set his alarm an hour early and send her back? Or set it two hours early, fuck her then send her back and take an hour nap? A couple times a week I set mine an hour early, wake the wife, eat her, fuck her, send her off to shower and eork and I go back to sleep ;) @@@


......ANYWAYS.... Best story ever! ...well in quite a while anyway, hehe... It BEGS for a second chapter with variations! Spankings. Taking her other virginity. Tying her up. Tying him up. Buying her a collar... And then a leash... Taking her shopping in a mall in a strange town while shes on the leash. (Play it off as a lost bet if someone you know sees you, hehe;). Roll playing. ...anyways, thanks for writing this!

WTF??!!??

What gives? Are we gonna see the REAL finale to "Kissing Kelly" and "Anita's Indiscretion" or fuck whatever? Everything else just blows; except this story, I guess.

C'mon.

-Stander

Gave you a 5 for effort and content

and to say fuck you dear annony

Iz dut so....?

Wellz fuck you too.....boo-hoo

Now! That's what big brothers are for....

That's what a big brother is supposed to do for his sister. Look after her in her time of need. And it looks like Johnny looked after her nicely..

To long

Sorry to long to hold attention

5*

Put absolute lust and the ultimate temptation together, and this is the way things could happen. Could have gone a bit into how Johnny felt when Monica was luring him on in Venice Beach. No brother would have stayed soft when his sister was telling him how much she needed to fuck, and letting him know he was her desire - not even if he could have resisted. 5* again!

very hot

Wow. Who wouldn't want this? :p

Nice buildup

You built a lot of sexual tension before any actual sex. Loved that. Women, or at least me, need more than just diving into sex acts. I didn't "give" you a 5; you earned the 5. Thanks for sharing your story.

almost a great story

but there is nothing romantic about calling her a whore. Doing that takes it from a moment of passion to degradation.

Exactly!

Wow. This story was amazing! One of my favorites.. I think bc I was able to identify with the little sister. The way she "is" is like me ;) But, it was very well written and I LOVE how incredibly detailed it is!! So good:) It feels so real. Like this must have really happened... I love it!

I know it's standard . . .

for the guy to be all reluctant and to say, "Things will never be the same again if we do this," but somehow it doesn't seem realistic. Men are hardwired to respond to certain kinds of stimulus. I don't have a sister, but I have a cousin and I'm pretty sure I'd jump at an invitation to jump her bones if she invited me like Monica did. Incest stories aren't as easy to write as a lot of people on Literotica seem to think; there are so many layers of meaning, of conflict, of emotion, that can't be handled adequately in a quick fuck-tale.

continue this story please. i want more.

Oh god

I saw myself as the sister in this story. I didn't even touch myself and I came. I need a sequel. Please.

HOT DAMN

Your first chapter had me worked up throughout! This chapter is so unbelievably erotic.

My mental image of the sister is a blonde Janice Griffith.

Well, that's stories for you...

It wouldn't make much sense for me to tell you one you already know. Also wouldn't make much sense for me to give up on a story halfway through, though I suppose that might be my troll logic at work...

On Spoilers for other stories/chapters

Bite me. Let the author do what he/she wants. If I want to love & 5-star this story based on this chapter, I will. I don't want someone else to tell me xyz happens down the line so I should....
I will (or won't) read on on my own. I may decide to hate the next chapters & 1-star them. (Or not.)
And I may even decide write disappointed, disillusioned comments *at the end of the chapter they are about.*

Unfortunately...

There's no way to "like" comments in these threads. But if there was, I would like that one so hard.

Literotica rules

I checked ... I guess spoilers can be reported.

Oh I don't mind

I only report comments that I think are hateful or harmful to readers. I mean, the description to chapter 4 is "a new girl complicates Johnny's love life," so I don't think the Anony's comment really spoils anything. Also not quite sure how it could have surprised the reader, but that's another issue entirely.

Super hot, got me so hard

I wish my relationship between me and my sister was like that. Me and her are really close but she's not into brother sister incest love stuff. She's 18 and i'm 19. Everytime i see her i get nervous because i just want to be able to kiss her and make love to her while she feels the same way towards me and there not be anything awkward between us. She has seen me naked before because i got out of the shower and thought no one was home and waked to my room without a towel on and she screamed out of embarrassment haha. She has the most perfect body (in my opinion) unfortunately i have never seen her naked. If i could make this story a reality for me, i would do it in a heartbeat.

Enjoyable

Well-paced, very good character development.

great story

this story was so good and this is only the first chapter XD

I forgot...

...I'd already read it, but great detail on how horny she was, the lead-in to them sharing...it was all hot. Even better read the 2nd time. Now I'll have to read the rest of the series. :)

Loved it

only read ch. 01 so far, and BY NIRN that was a good story, so good i had to cum twice. i'd give it a 7/5 but alas, only a 5/5 can do.