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The Night I Discovered a Woman

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by EastPubnico08/15/15

So much in such a short span

It's quite amazing how you managed to fit a whole story, feelings, emotional progression and the rest in such a short piece without making it rushed or losing anything. Marvellous job.

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by olsalty08/16/15

Fine Easy Pacing

Yes, I agree that this piece crammed a lot of eros into a short timeframe. We feel we know her, our hesitant newbie-lez. Beautifully rich and finely crafted work, ms L&L.

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