All Comments on 'Elaborate D?colletage'

by Linbido

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herecomestherainherecomestherainover 20 years ago
Great flight of fantasy!

I don't generally stop by the poetry section much, but after reading this I will. This is hot, clever and full of great imagery. Well done and thanks.

Colleen ThomasColleen Thomasover 20 years ago
Outstanding!

Absolutely mezmerizing. Very well done!

lucky-E-levenlucky-E-levenabout 20 years ago
Delicious

Um...WOW! If I knew how to stammer on a keyboard, I would be doing so now. The scene you paint with your words is one I have oft fantasized about and the delicious deception turns me on to no end. The ultimate mind fuck. You've a wonderful talent, Ms. Lin and I greatly enjoyed this poem.

Sincerely,

lucky

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,000 poems.

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