Megan and Alex

I really like your characters

Please please please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter!!!
Tanx, Tony

Yeah, so naughty and arousing ! Yes please tell us more about them both and please write more chapter(s) about how they will spend their time..... you have a great story here and it just needs to go on. Thank you.

Fast But Satisfying

Yeah Megan and Alex do not seem to believe in delayed gratification. I wish my sister had been a little more like Megan. Wondering if the whole family is going to get into the act.

Great first story

Well written and sexy. Looking forward to future efforts :)

I liked it, very good first effort. I look forward to reading more from you in the future.

good 1st story

but to quick to the sex & pretty much same as every other incest story
#Really thick eight-inch cock!!
Why do the brothers in incest stories always have thick eight-inch or longer thinker cocks & all the sisters were fat virgins turned into thin slut

Not bad

First story.
You know a naughty picture in your Bio would be nice.

Great beginning

Give sexy Alex some chest hair (he is 21 after all) for Megan to stroke…it can be very exciting for both of them to have her run her fingers gently over his hairy pecs and treasure trail?? Then perhaps she can kiss his pecs and lick at the hair there.

Good 1st Story

As others have mentioned, the pacing could be slower... tease us a bit... But some nice writing here.

very good first time

good words, good action. Needs more of same. At least a little insight into his thoughts... She had wanted him, did he dream of her? Maybe had a fight w Lindsey when he moaned "Meagan," when fucking her?
And yes, really, 8" cocks r too big to b fun for most of us, and all tits don't have to b DD; my Cs r quite nice, thank u.
With incest especially lingering over want to / it's wrong can increase the tension, not only in the story but in ur reader's pants.
But very nice; do more!!
OneSilky

WOW!!

For your first story, Wow!! that was hot I was a little disapointed to find no page Two where they would have cleaned up in the shower, I hope you write a chapter Two.

nice for Part one

now that was nice maybe for Part two you sure get mom to join in this or maybe the Brother Girlfriend from camp maybe sis can have other ones of her Girlfriends can join in with them two

didn't feel right

i don't know. yea it was hot but it didn't feel like they where brother and sister other than you just saying it. they acted more like a couple who hadn't seen each other in a while. it was supposed to be there first time together but i didn't get that vibe.

zen lilmistress

yes very naughty mad emeblush and wet very nice very good haha

Not convincing!

Seriously description was pretty catch but story, not so much.
I really appreciate your effort but i think you need to read more stories like from user xarth etc and learn from them.
You need to make us believe first that they actually were siblings by showing some affection, care, guilt and so on.
Thanks but lot of space for improvement...