My Wife and Her Sister

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This needs another chapter at least, so much more to explore.

nice

Incredible story

Oh, The Possibilities...

Okay I guess sister will be there for a few months or forever. You have the chance to tell us some more stories though and I hope you do. The bisexual hints about the sisters should be resolved as well.

Really Hot

This story should make the "Top Lists"

Next chapter

And there does need to be a next chapter. This is a really good story with hints of what may have happened in the past and could happen in the future. His wife said she doesn't suck cock, but might she be persuaded to eat pussy? Oh the possibilities.

it's obvious if you read the story the wife at least cheated upstairs on him with her sister. She might have been cheating for the last 6 months since he says she hangs out with her sister every day all day. That's prob the real reason he hasn't been getting any for 6 months. I wife that with holds out for 6 months and then says i won't blow you.. and I'll give it to you once a month..is screwing around. Hide a camera and catch her and her sister and whoever else she's sleeping with and he'll have all the leverage he wants for anything he wants.

Nothing new here

You lost me after the sixth paragraph. All commentary and no dialogue. Almost childish in elucidating a malformed and awkwardly expressed fantasy,

Anonymous said that she might be persuaded to eat pussy. That's funny! Because she admitted playing with her sister's pussy. Did you ever hear of 2 lesbians who didnt lick each other's pussies? What's even funnier is that she's licking her sister's pussy, but she cant suck her husband's dick. So, why cant she suck her husbands dick. She is smelling her sister so much, that she isn't giving her husband much sex, so her sister is licking his wife enough to keep her pussy satisfied, thus his wife needs no dick. Maybe his wife,s sister is the only one doing the pussy licking. So, maybe the husband and sister- in- law, should tie a rope around his wife's tits & force the wife to eat them out. Then divorce her..

Thanks

Hey guys.

Thanks for the feedback both good and bad. I'm currently working on the actual sister sideline story. I wanted to explore it further but, up until I had done my research on what literotica's rules are I didn't want to stray to far into the incest route. Rest assured the next story is very much every guys fantasy. Fingers crossed.

As for mountaincat4, I do appreciate feedback when it's constructive. I've read your stories and over all, great rating but the fantasy element leaves a lot to be desired. Some areas of your writing give to much description and some others to little. Overall, I would assume you haven't proofed your work or have the creative intellect assosicated to some writers to fully engage with your audience or characters. Lastly, and this is just an assumption, but as you like to use long words to try to belittle budding authors, I imagine you have very few friends with which you can have an interesting conversation. Go back to your cave and dip the world a favour, or at least be constructive in your feedback. Thanks