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A great story - well written.
Poignant story
I loved your description of how people in small towns perceive their lives, how their ambitions are limited by their surroundings. It is strange but true that those towns still exist in today's world. The poignant meeting of the two lovers was very well described as well, as was their loving. Although that last part could have been extended a bit! Thanks for writing this lovely story.
continue
Please continue this wonderful story
A very nice romance of re-found love after so long - begs for more!
I've had the pleasure of reading several of your stories. It's obvious to me you enjoy developing the story with phrases. Great job! The readers need more of your gift! Thanks for writing!
rushed tale
not a bad tale but rushed from start to finish. could have been so much more.
Excellent Description of an interrupted romance
Now we hope that the gentleman knows what is good for him!
Nice -
5ed :)
I think it could be fleshed out (no pun intended) a lot, though. Leaves one waiting for more.
beautiful
well written
touching
powerful
brought back memories of my own return after 20 years.
thank you
Touching
Thank you. I am not a writer so my comments are from a reader's point of view. The emotions expressed earlier in the story and the tenderness lasted until the actual sex began. Two people who know so much about each other's sexuality and enjoy each other may have taken more time to relish the renewal of their bond. The ending did seem a bit rushed. Again, thank you. Please keep writing, I'll keep reading...
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