Would like to here more about this step-brother and step-sister and their incestuous ways.
great start but would like more back story in anything following
very good start, needs to be continued with several more chapters. Very good job
"....polishing my parental pods..." lol. very nice
An interesting, innovative plot which concluded on the spot.
I a-love alliteration! Encore!
entertaining but the alliteration is cheesy
Great story
good story but I feel it was unfinished please continue this one
she get paid? did she share?
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Sequel Please
Would like to here more about this step-brother and step-sister and their incestuous ways.
Great start
great start but would like more back story in anything following
very good start, needs to be continued with several more chapters. Very good job
Promising
"....polishing my parental pods..." lol. very nice
Plot
An interesting, innovative plot
which concluded on the spot.
4
I a-love alliteration! Encore!
ehh
entertaining but the alliteration is cheesy
Great story
dynamite
good story but I feel it was unfinished please continue this one
she get paid?
did she share?
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