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Enjoyed it
wasnt sure the story would continue and wasn't sure it would head in this kind of direction. This was much better. Thanks.
So far so good
But after waiting 13 days for part 2 it was much, much to short and took far to long to hold my interest. I really want to see it through because I think it will be a very good story because I have read many of your works and you are a good story teller. Keep it going but hurry up please.
You still have the Just Plain Bob syndrome
You are making this up as you go or you are just mind fucking us, otherwise you would have submitted your story parts in a matter of successive days. You seem torn between your fetish of being a cuckold and wanting to write a BTB story. By the way, I think the percentage of men who get aroused at the thought of their wife having any kind of sex with another man is probably very small and no where near half (50 percent). There just seems to be a parade of these diseased sick fucks on Literotica. I dare you to make it a real BTB or at least a kick her ass in line with her marriage vows on the wife. It would be good and healthy for your mental state. ---Dr. Hoppydoodle
Leave them wanting more
Well I'm very pleased you decided to continue with the story, but disappointed that this just a morsel. More please
Why this title?
This title make us think that the writer had more than one ending to propose...But after reading it we find out that's not the case...Until now it's just talking, no action...Let's wait for the finale the writer prepared for us...3* for now, just for the advice he got in the plane...
Ending?
I Found my Wife on MarriedHookup Ch. 02 Ending 01: Did I miss something in the title?
Good story but....
Each episode ends very abruptly, and since they are short and there is so much time in between, it's hard to remember what preceded. I'd stop reading until they were all done, but now I'm drawn in. It's just an "ugh" moment I guess.
WHY ????
...for christ sake did you feel compelled to write this lets-call-it-ending?
It did nothing for the story, gave absolutely no explanation and it did not even come close to what you call "ending" You should not encourage your readers to read part 1 because they would just get frustrated aver reading this chapter. Either you feel compelled to end a story properly or you should stop publishing half a story. Sorry, mate: You had a fine story there...and spilt everything with this chapter. No rating possible.
I'll check back when the entire story is out
These chapters are way too short and too far apart. I forgot what happened in chapter one and had to re-read it. Now I will have to do that for these two chapters when the next one comes out.
No offense, but that is too much work for a story that is broken up like this. One page blurbs make it frustrating and detract from the story. The author would have done better to finish this and put it out in one sitting.
Good writing
Far too " abbreviated" submission! The reader has no time to invest in the story. Writers need remember that us readers will read four or five other stories between your chapter submissions so it's best to make them of a rememberable length and content. At the end of each submission you should Bait & Hook us for your next submission (chapter)
enjoyed
I enjoyed this story, i do hope you continue it, I would love to know what is going on from Wendy, this sort of story happens thats what makes this a good read
Interesting
It certainly does not read like an ending but I do like the counselor's solution. What I really do not understand is why our hero does not make pre-emptive strike? It seems better for the kids.
Good continutation
I await the rest with interest!
Way too short a part 2
I was disappointed. It's a PIA to read a story in such little nippets
What I read was good, howevwr
Chilley
Not enough
There isn't enough in here to make the story enjoyable anymore. Author dangled whether she would cheat or nor-and never even got to it. Went all around the story taglines, but didn't hit on any. Almost a waste of time. I still think he needs to write two endings-a hotwife/cuckold(what's the difference) and a btb ending where he burns her and the friend.
ending???
You are already lying to us in the title by calling it an ending.
tags: WTF is a delemia?
Please finish the story
I've enjoyed what I read so far. Version 2 of the ending is weak, no need to follow up there. This version continues to hold my interest, but it's still up in the air
You're disgusting
Why else would you add getting an erection at the thought of getting cuckolded? Hiding and watching? The only thought a man would have would be the joy of beating two rapists to death, knowing the resident slut wouldn't dare say different! Now that's a fantasy worth having!
Weak Ending
A more creative ending would have been nice.
I guess I missed something
Because this doesn't feel like an ending. Especially with the last sentence telling us that more was to come? If he's formulating a plan doesn't that indicate another chapter is due that has him explaining and executing his plan? This ending seems unfinished.
It's looking better
Let's see how Ch. 03 goes.
very well written
hot and erotic
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