Cheating Wife & Cuckold Husband #03

What's wrong with this story is not the writer but with the reader.

Presently with 600 hits and 16 votes, my story has a score of 1.81. That's a score even lower than my gun control essay (lol).

So, when the story is well written, has a good plot, dialogue, tension, imagery, description, and character development, why does it not have a higher score?

Come closer to the screen so that I don't have to yell.

Because the only readers who always vote without even reading the story are the bashers, the whackos, the malcontents, and the motherfuckers who don't have a life and who blame their misery on women. Yeah, I'm writing about you, assholes.

The rest of you, who read my story, who enjoy my stories, and believe that this is a well written story, don't vote. You don't vote. You seldom if ever vote. Why don't you vote? Are you afraid that someone will know that you're reading erotic stories on a porn site? Is that it?

What does it matter? As soon as you go anywhere on the Internet "they" know where you are and what you're doing. So...vote for my frigging story so that I may have a score higher than 1.81. After all of the hard work I had to do to write this story, I deserve a score that reflects my hard work.

Perhaps I should have posted this story to the Mature category instead of the Loving Wives category. I don't know. Yet, I don't blame those maladjusted assholes who scrolled down to the bottom of my story to give me a 1 bashing vote without even reading my story, I more blame my loyal fans who read all that I write but seldom if ever vote.

Vote! Vote from my frigging story. This is how G W Bush was elected president because the majority of Democrats don't vote.

Okay, how's this. For every 5 vote I receive, I'll give that reader a gun. How's that?

Seriously, there's more wrong with you for not giving me the support of your vote, a five vote, than there is with these Loving Wives fans who have nothing better to do than to shit all over his board and all over you by down voting stories with their lunacy.

Now, for my fans and for those who truly enjoyed reading this story, I want you to get up out of your chair, pull up your pants and underwear, and put your sticky finger on the 5 key and vote me a five vote. It's time we took back control of a writers and readers site from those few men who don't appreciate what this site is and could be.

A few maladjusted men have no idea what it takes to write a story like this. How dare you allow them to shit all over this board without giving me your voting support to offset their lunacy.

Gave you a 5 the first time and today gave you a 5 again

I"d like a Sig 9mm!! please. Thanks Bonnie

5* for you comment...

I read your comment and I would give it 5*...You knew vwry well that this story couldn't have a good score...But you took it well and even joked about it...That's the spirit...

@ SusanJillParker

I completly respect your opinions and tastes but don't you think the subject of this story may have smth to do with the low rates ?
I will give you 3*** for the effort and out of respect

In real life

In real life I am a avid reader. I have many favorite authors, when picking a novel by one of them I know I will get a good story most of the time. It is no different on Lit..
With that said the problem is not the readers it is lit. management refusing to put stories like yours in fetish where it most likely would get a favorable score.

Loving Wife's was always just that Loving Wife's than Lit. management decided to add to it in lieu of creating new categories.

I do agree it takes a lot of hard work to create a readable story believe me I tried ! and failed. With all due respect I gave your story 1 star not for your writing ability which is 5 stars but for content.

To SJP

Look, I haven't voted so my hands are clean. Just a couple of suggestions. One, never use "fucking" as an adjective. You sound like trailer trash. Two, for God's sake make up your mind if he's Chris or Christopher.

Trailer trash?

As written by twenty-seven: "Look, I haven't voted so my hands are clean. Just a couple of suggestions. One, never use "fucking" as an adjective. You sound like trailer trash. Two, for God's sake make up your mind if he's Chris or Christopher."

Trailer Trash? I just write the stories 27 or is it XXVII or twenty-seven. I was never that good at math. Tell me, did your mother name you 27 because she couldn't remember the name of the man who impregnated her?

"Damn, I'm not sure if his daddy was #27 or #69 during that gangbang. I'll just name him 27. I don't want folks thinking that I'm a trailer trash whore," said 27's mother.

The fact that you admitted that you didn't vote doesn't make your hands clean, it just makes you a user and an abuser of the site. You just read, jerk off, and really don't give a shit how hard the author's work on your behalf. Yet, what would you know, you're just an ignorant child, barely a full grown man.

Sometimes, especially in dialogue, XXVII, it's preferable to use fucking as an adjective. Allow me to give you an example.

"You're a fucking asshole, twenty-seven!"

See? That works so much better than having me call you a dimwitted nitwit, don't you think?

Now, there's nothing wrong with mixing up a character's name by calling my character Chris one time or Christopher another time. Allow me to give you another example.

When you're having sex with your mother, 27, don't you call her Mom when French kissing her, mother when fucking her, and Mommy when she's blowing you and you're feeling her tits and fingering her nipples?

I thought so. I accept your apology.

As far as being trailer trash, I've never even stepped foot in a trailer. It's true. I've never been to your house.

5* for Both of Your Rants No Vote on This Story

Susan, As well written as this.story is I find it hard for me to care or identify with either of there characters .Particularly the wife.I could care less if she cuckold/cheats on her husband. Thats reality in a lot of circustances. What I don't get is "I love when my fucking husband travels ". "Fuck You Jay".Why is she married? Sorry ,Susan that just doesn't make sense.Lastly if you are writing for scores in Loving Wive you are delusional.Why are you writing for scores.Why give a shit? When push comes to shove it's still just anonymous people voting on a fictional.story .In most cases Susan I enjoy your writing.You definitely have a talent.This however is NOT one of your better reads.As for voting? Not worth it after your rants.Good Luck

Well Written

Your writing is clearly at the top percentile on Lit. I have written stuff here and on another site and am well aware of the trolls, wackos and just, plain snotty people who hide behind Internet anonymity. I suspect that damned few of them are capable of writing a grocery list!

It's clear from your responses, SusanjillParker, that you can take care of yourself. Hit 'em again, lady, hit 'em again.

And, VOTE people, VOTE. If you like it, vote it up. If you don't, say why but can't you do it with some class?

Actually Zed

Actually Zed, this story may not make sense to you but it sure makes sense to Walter, the man who asked me to write his story.

He's still angry over his wife, even after divorcing her years ago and remarrying a better woman.

His first wife took half of his considerable fortune in the divorce under California's divorce laws. Even though she was a drunk and a whore who preferred having sex with men nearly half her age while not giving the same sexual satisfaction to her husband, she walked away with half of what he worked so hard to earn.

Her saying, "Fuck you, Jay," and giving him the literal and figurative finger truly describes her character.

I'm sorry you don't think it's one of my better stories but I think that it's one of my best stories because it's written as part of a true story. Perhaps had I fictionalized the story more by writing in vampires and dragons, you may have more enjoyed my story.

Susan....

Are you always this bitter when the readership dislikes one of your stories? If so I feel sorry for you.Maybe you should be writing about vampires and dragons.Might get better feedback than your getting with this.If I remember correctly you reacted this way with one of your other LW'so stories awhile back.Just FYI Bashing your readers because they dislike one of your posts shows far more about you than the commenter .Don't like the comments ?Turn them off.If you truly think that the readers in LW's are going to laud a story such as this you are delusional.Good Luck

Bashing my readers?

Bashing my readers is an oxymoronic comment, don't you think?

I don't give my readers a bashing 1 vote for scrolling down to the bottom of my story without even reading my story to bash my story with their lowest vote.

I don't give my readers a bashing 1 vote for writing grammatically incorrect comments.

I don't give my readers a bashing 1 vote for personally attacking me by calling me trailer trash.

If someone calls me a name and/or unjustifiably attacks my story by giving me the lowest possible vote after not even reading the story, then I feel compelled to voice my opinion.

Oh, by the way, sorry, nothing personal. I slashed your tires while you were reading this comment.

I Guess I Was Right!

Bitter ,Bitter ,Bitter.BTW I would be careful starting your car anytime in the near future.You never know?

While dear annony was bitching and slashing her tires, I was

fucking his wife daughter and saving my cum for his cereal!!! Fuck you in the heart dear annony!!

Actually Zed

Actually Zed (is that really your name), if you're a hillbilly from a West Virginia mining town I guess?

Anyway, I no longer have a car (sniff, sniff). I lost my car in great 100 year flood of the Susquehanna River on 9/11/11. Read my Who is the Writer SusanJillParker. It's all there.

Bitter? I've been in enough writing workshops along the way of earning my BS degree in English with Creative Writing and English Literature Minors to grow a skin thick enough to handle anyone hear can throw at me.

See, the difference with me as opposed to other writers other writers who write here, I know I'm a hack but I always try to write the best story that I possibly can. My downfall is, I don't write porn. I write erotica. I write real stories with plot, character development, tension, imagery, description, and dialogue. I actually even name my characters, something that many porn writers don't too.

Alas, much like beating my head against the wall, most readers here don't want to read erotica. They don't want me to entertain them with my creativity and writing skills. They'd rather masturbate while reading Mommy having sex with her son and big sister having sex with her little brother. Sure, I've written those stories too, but I actually develop my characters.

May a camel never shit on your head. It makes quite the mess.

Thank you for almost reading my story and not voting, I think.

Vastiesmith2

Just wondering Vastiesmith2...

Did you take any pictures of you having sex with his wife, sister, and mother (lol)?

@Susan Odd, despite your protestations

It reads like porn to me. Your arrogance is off putting and sad. You are a good writer but your ego is writing checks that your current story can't cash.

I wasn't going to vote. I found the piece boring and not worth a vote. But having read your comments, I'm giving you 1*- only because I can't vote lower and a no vote won't affect your average.

You are talented and your hubris and quips are unworthy of that talent.

Unfortunately Susan

I did read your story or I would not have commented.To be honest I would not have commented but for your irrational rants bashing other readers.You see Susan it's a bit unusual for the author to attack their readership.But then again.... I said before I appreciate your talent I wish I had the ability to write.I have a Masters in Mathematics so the literary gene skipped me. This will be my last comment in regards to this story.Seems to me we are going in circles. I will say one thing though.You seem to have found your target audiencell with the inclusion of vastiesmith2.In short order there will be another incoherent comment from bonniet who I believe are one in the same person.Whatever make you happy Susan.I will refrain from the idiotic personal attacks.It's beneath both of us.

Fuck annony up the ass with a 12 inch cock. I loved the story

and if you go off on some of these asshole people on here , even better!!! Especially the assholes who don't leave their names. They are destroying this site and many writers have left or just stopped writing. So I say you go girl and stick it to the fags annony!

vastiesmith2

In case you have not noticed there are no anonymous comments in regards to this story? Feel stupid now? Sorry Susan. Could not help it.Like I said you have found your audience.

SusanJillParker

I personally liked the story if it was true or not. It was a great read for me. I guess the reason being I don't have the balls to writing anything on here.

Palewriter

To Palewriter

Oh, my God. Palewriter! You gave me a 1 vote only because you were unable to give me a lower vote? How could you? When I commit suicide because of your comment, this will be on you (sniff, sniff).

I'm so sad. I'm broken. I may never recover (boo hoo).

My arrogance? I'm personally attacked yet I'm arrogant to respond. My story is bashed with you even admitting to giving a 1 vote and I'm not supposed to respond. I'm just supposed to bend over and allow you to have you wicked way with my ass. Is that it?

Okay, let's turn the tables. For everyone who gives me a 5 vote, Palewriter will give you a blowjob.

To Knaughty

Thank you for your kind comments. The check is in the mail.

To Vastiessmith2

Would it be okay if I, um, used a strap-on dildo as I don't have a cock 12" or otherwise?

Bend over Zed. This one is for you.

Ah, I need a cigarette. I hope you enjoyed that as much as I did.

just fucking sad

@ SJP
I haven't read this story nor will I due to its low score and you ranting at commenters. You've written some amazing stories over the years and it's actually pretty sad to see an author of such quality as yourself, ranting like a loon along with what comes across as a begging for votes. If low scores are going to bother you so much, I suggest turning them off.

To Zed

Irrational rants? Idiotic personal attacks on my readership?

Answer me this Zed, why am I the one at fault when all I did was to post a story?

Most times, I don't respond to readers personally attacking me by calling me trailer trash and by down voting my story with 1 votes without even reading my story. Yet, after a while, you kick a dog and the dog will bite you.

I've written more than 10 million words under 7 different names until finally writing stories under my real name. I've written more than 1,500 stories and more than 200 poems that have massed more than 250 million hits. I am modestly, one of the premier writers on the site. Yet, my scores don't reflect that. Why is that Zed?

I'm not able to win a monthly or theme contest because all of my stories are bashed by readers like you. Is it because I've won more money on this site than any other author? Is it because I was given an elusive Green E by the owner of the site?

The bashing of my stories started in 2007 under my BostonFictionWriter name when I was given the Green E. I've finished 2nd place in Literotica's Survivor contest three times in 2007, 2008, and 2010, the writer with the most stories in the most categories wins. I won the contest three times in 2014, 2013, and 2011.

They no longer award money for the contest $500 for first and $250 for 2nd, no doubt because no one could beat me. Yet, along the way, as my penalty for being such a dedicated writer, I'm mercilessly bashed by the likes of readers like you.

Out of more than 1 million stories on the site, my story, I Love You, Mommy, written under my WmForrester name, was the most read story in all of 2010 and is presently in #60th place on the all-time most read list with nearly 2 million hits. I would have had two other stories in the top ten under my BostonFictionWriter named but I pulled them in 2007 to publish them as e-Books.

Presently, out of more than 60,000 writers on the site, I'm the 22nd most favored author. Not bad for someone who you think should only receive a 1 vote or lower. Do you think I reached that lofty place by bashing my readership or by not commenting to the mean spirited bashing of my readership?

I didn't get there by bashing my readership yet I'd be God damn if I'm going to have assholes call me trailer trash and give me 1 votes without even reading my stories. Fuck you, Zed.

After the smoke clears, I'll PM Laurel, the owner of the site, and have her remove all the bashing 1 votes.

Have a wonderful life in West Virginia Zed playing with your abacus.

@susan well the blowjobs (and apparently everything else) are your department

and yes, your attitude in the comments earned you the 1*. I wasn't going to vote at all and then reach that stuff. BTW this is far from your best piece of writing. I have enjoyed stuff from you in the past, this was really not up to your standards. Of course I don't read the stuff you write outside of LW, and non-erotic. This was not erotic, it was porn. The way we can tell is that Bonnie/Vastie/Anon/Anon liked it and he's still living in his mom's basement and posting pix of women he would like to be in his/her/it's profiles.

Have a lovely day, grow a thicker skin, and keep writing. (Even Bob Parker, as temperamental as he was knew better than to attack his readers, even if he didn't respect or even like them)

WOW

The Fat Girl is very Angry ! Who is Anonymous ? We are all Anonymous ! Let's be honest! Why was this story written ? Why would a man who was screwed over by a woman want a story written about her ? Makes no cents !

To Lit Mangement

Wake up people ! The readers of loving Wife's do not want this type of story ! Look at the rating ! It is very poor ! Why ? Because your readers do not want stories about cheaters ! I can only speak for my self but I only log on to LW the most popular cat !

NO SUSAN!!

You pompous conceited cunt.I don't give a fuck if you wrote 100 million words and won fucking the Nobel Prize .Don't you get it? My only comment concerned this story. It sucked..Okay.? If you can't handle the comments which is relatively obvious by your total meltdown then maybe just maybe you should turn them off .Or can't you grasp that concept you fucking bitch.I'm not the only one who sees your rants as inane and for your information you two bit whore I did not make this personal I made it about a free story written on a porn website. So go fuck yourself cunt.You thin skinned bitch you belong with vastiesmith and bonnie standing on the boulevard.Once again Susan you made it about me and not about the story so please go fuck yourself Guess what 1*

The reason people give you 1 votes is because you suck as a writer.

Plain and simple. Your dialog is painful. Try reading it aloud and you'll see what I mean. Does anyone talk that way? You also recycle the same points over and over. You need to learn an economy of words. Plus, you are the king of run on sentences.

Quality plays no part at all in ones ranking in the Survivor Contest. Zero. All it measures is quantity of submissions. So bask in the glow of your victory, just know that you submitted a bunch of shit.

One would think that after writing so much you'd improve as an author. Sadly, no. You still continue to pump out excrement.

Rather than berating people for telling the truth, why don't you try to improve? I'm sorry, but your stories are freshman level at best.

That's it Zed. You did it now!

Does your mother know you write like that? I'm telling your mother.

Oh, my God, KayakJack. I'm so very sorry that you don't like my writing. You're absolutely right. I do suck as a writer.

Would you help me? Learn how to write better. I guess what I learned majoring in college and writing for 25 years before that wasn't nearly enough.

Perhaps you could help me write a story. Only when I went to you page to look at the vast number of stories that you wrote for you to dare critique me, guess what? I couldn't find where you wrote any stories, not a one.

So, lemme get this straight through my dumb, blonde head. Is the reason why you pass judgement on writers is because you are a great writer in your mind or a really good reader?

"Sticks and Stones CanoeJoe, sticks and stones."

I never claimed to be a great writer but I have written some great stories. It's just the Loving Wives bunch are out of their minds. Nonetheless because I'm a survivor of sexual abuse at the hands of seven men from the ages of 5 to 15, give me your best shot Jack because I won't take shit from on one. And if you were here in front of me, you'd never say what you wrote. You'd be too busy peeing and shitting you panties because I'd kick your ass.

Oh, thank you for reading my story. Have a nice day. Peace be with you. God bless you. I love you CanoeJoe.

Gee Susan I'm Disappointed

I would think that someone that has written a billion words would have a more witty retort than the old mom thing.Sorry Susan don't have a mom the big C got her.Good Luck Susan you certainly know how to make friends.I truly wish you .........

The comments are certainly

entertaining. SJP, I have not read your stuff in the past but will in the future. Although not really my bag, I believe it was written well and did give you a 5 to counter some of the reactionaries. Keep on writing. Do something more emotional, dramatic and plot driven, such as some of Ohio's, DQS, Joesephus, Rehnquist, matt moreau, hdk, et al. You certainly have the ability if you wanted to.

anon.1

A couple of things (maybe more)

One - the story is really not bad and I did like it. I am sure many people did.

Two - Kate, people who read Loving Wives don't want to read about happy monogamous relationships as a general rule. I am sure there are exceptions.

Three - I agree with Vastie, the abuse heaped on authors who do not write what someone wants them to is out of line on this free site and has driven away some of the better writers. If you do not like a genre or a particular story don't read it. I actually believe some of the commentators use the comment section as therapy for themselves. They obviously enjoy being able to write emotional, negative comments to stories they knew they would not like while they were reading them.

My two cents.

anon.1

Late to the party

I obviously missed out on one hell of a discussion.

This story makes me sad. I obviously am not as angry as most of the other commenters have been, but I look at things a little differently than others. I see a marriage that is in turmoil. She and her husband are doing this to EACH OTHER. She is a victim as well as the perpetrator.

This story happens in life everyday. Most of us know people in this situation, we just don't realize it. A marriage like this will implode.

I do have a few questions for the author. I haven't read the other chapters because I don't read the incest category much, so some of my questions may have been answered in previous chapters.

Why does she hate her husband? It seems she blames herself for his infidelity, so that doesn't seem to be the reason. It appears that her hatred of him predates his cheating. I'm just curious.

It also seems that she hates herself as much as she hates him. She is on a path that is self destructive. She is fully aware of it. She has already had a brush with fate dealing with the pregnancy, and it hasn't slowed her down. Why?

In my opinion, I don't think she really hates her husband at all. I know that if people are still reading the comment section for this story that they are going to break their keyboard telling me how wrong I am, but it appears so. I think that she really hates herself and is projecting that on to him. All of the things that she is doing is really to herself, not him. I assume that he is blissfully ignorant of her infidelity in the first place, so how is it hurting him? I think she is running head first into some consequences that will punish her. I think she feels she deserves it for some reason.

Like I said, I haven't read the last chapters. That is just what it seems like to me from these two pages. I will go back and read the others to see.

To the author: Don't get discouraged by people bashing your stories. Let them tell you what a shitty writer you are. Chances are, they are the same people said that you were a shitty writer in YOUR LAST STORY. Your name popped up again and they still read it. So what if the score is down? You know that you are a good writer and deserving of a better score. Post what you want where you want it. If you don't like the negative comments, turn them off. If you don't like the score, turn it off. Don't look for validation. As much as I don't like xleglover's stories, he steadily posts his chapters, all the while getting 2 an 3 star scores. He never retaliates or responds to the readers who bash him.

You are so much better than that. You don't need to prove that you are a good writer. If they don't appreciate it, it just means that it wasn't written for them. Don't let them lower you to their level.

Thank you

Thank you Javmor79 for your kind comment. Your support is much appreciated. If only more readers would show their gratitude for the writers who write for free here in the continued entertainment of them. Yet, most readers, only 4 out of hundred readers who open a story to read it will vote. Only 2 out of every 1,000 readers who open a story to read it will make a comment. Shame on them.

If a performer sang or danced for you, you'd clap at the end of their performance. Yet, with writers taking hour upon hours to create, develop, write, edit, rewrite, and reedit stories for you to read and enjoy, you can't take a second to vote. How dare you be so ungrateful? How dare you be so selfish?

We, as writers, have a much better chance of being bashed and down voted than we do being complimented and given a 4 or 5 vote. Admittedly, it's always the same ungrateful malcontents who are the most vocal and mean spirited in nature. Yet, with me putting a target on my back, if it was about the votes, the comments, and the scores, I still wouldn't be here writing. My skin is as thick as my head and as tough as my spirit.

Writing is my passion. I love to write stories. Writing while sipping a cup of black, Starbucks, French Roast coffee is what I do every day, 7 days a week from 4 am to noon. Then, I answer e-mails. As long as the e-mails aren't nasty, I answer all the e-mails that I receive. It's my way to thank the reader for voting for me, whether giving me a 1 vote or a 5 vote, I still respond.

Something that I still scratch my head over, whenever I post an incest story, especially a mother/son incest story, I receive 200 to 300 e-mails the first two days of posting and I answer them all. Mother and son incest stories seem to be the favorite as well as the most forbidden.

@ susan

I think the incest crowd is different than the LW crowd. Incest is, for the most part, a fantasy. Most of the people reading it haven't acted out on it or had it play out in real life. So for them, reading a story about it is simply a means to realize a fantasy.

People who read the LW section are a different breed. Many of them read these stories in wake of a tragic loss due to a cheating spouse. The others imagine what they would feel if they were to suffer a loss like that. When they read a story, especially one with a female voice, it is almost like they are hearing it from the woman who did them wrong. When said female voice has extra marital affairs, and enjoys them with no consequences, they tend to take it more seriously and closer to heart. Not to mention the fact that you say this is a true story. That means that there is a real live woman who is out there, enjoying having fun with a younger guy, and leaving her husband in her wake.

You write well, but to this crowd, it is like a delicious steak dinner being served on a trash can lid (Cosby show analogy). No matter how much time you spend fine tuning your tale it will be hated. You spend countless hours finding the perfect phrase that paints the picture in your head, or finding the right wording to bring a conversation to life. You will reread your work, make some changes, reread again, and smile to yourself. You will post it, knowing that you put your all into your story. Then, you will check to comments to hear people tell you how much your writing sucks.

In essence, they aren't judging your writing. They are judging THEIR FEELINGS that your writing invokes. This feeling is anger. Resentment. Hurt. Pain. None of these feelings are erotic. They can't look at these stories from a fantasy perspective because the feelings are REAL. A person who lost someone close to lung cancer is not going to casually talk about smoking a cigarette. A teenager who lost a parent to AIDS is not going to fantasize about having sex without a condom.

Just remember this when you post in LW. I'm not saying don't do it. There are many people who can read these stories strictly for fantasy. They see the hot sex scenes that you described and they can picture them. Those are the people you write for. But not everyone is going to view it in that light. Just be prepared for it.

A couple of points regarding this story

First of all, it's posted in the wrong category since it involves incest and should never have been posted in the LW section. Had I realized where the story was going I would not have read it as incest isn't my cup of tea. As to the story itself I found it to be uninteresting. And none of the characters were very likeable. Once it became clear where it was going I quit reading. I found the authors criticism of the readers to be odd. This is a porn site on the world wide web. Most authors are smart enough to refrain from engaging random, unknown (although we're all unknown, Anon or not) people in a debate they can't win. Regardless of the time spent, I think most authors write for their own enjoyment and post their stories simply because they can. A very, very few are actually good enough to publish. The rest of the stories range from the very well done, to the awful - how can you post this garbage - stories. Most of us don't care about the circumstances of the authors. We're looking to be entertained. Voting or commenting just doesn't play into the equation. That's why the LW section has become so bitter and contentious. Many of the stories fail to entertain and the few readers that vote or comment (we've seen similar complaints before about the lack of reader participation) are certainly vocal about their likes and dislikes (where's HarryinVA been lately?). So complaining or berating the readership is like howling into a hurricane - useless. Sorry that you feel people are unappreciative of the time spent, but to use a common cliche - Nobody cares.

@javmor79

Dude, you are way over analyzing this. It's not just a case of the "LW crowd" not liking a certain story type or there being a particular reader type. Cuck stories tend not to do well overall, just look and the hall of fame to see the proof and even when they posted in other sections like incest or romance (WTF) they tend to get slated. Hell, when the same story gets posted on quality story websites like SoL, it gets lousy scores over there as well. Christ, you just have to look at the new story listings for LW and you will see the highest score there is a 3.8.

3 point fucking 8 !

It's really a disgrace how piss poor management of this website and lack of any sort of quality control or enforcement of posting guidelines is killing LW.

The simple fact is, people like happy endings with the good guys coming out on top and the villains getting their just deserts. Hollywood and TV are prime examples of this.

@Jounar

I don't think I am overanalyzing it, but I see your point too. The reason why I feel I am right is because of what the commenters say when they tell their stories. Even palewriter labeled them "the walking wounded".

My question is this. I understand not liking a story. Why do people feel the need to ATTACK it? Why the anger? Cuckold stories incite more anger than disinterest. Why? People don't get angry about something that isn't personal to them.

That is why I believe what I wrote.

@javmor79 I'm pretty sure that you get this but...

I do not use the term "walking wounded" as a pejorative. I think it does reflect a significant percentage of readership. We're older, have been hurt, and are trying to make sense of deception, betrayal, and inflicted pain. Some of us have may have deceived, betrayed, and inflicted pain and are trying to understand ourselves.

I suspect many have over generalized about wives and somehow believe that all women will betray. Others want to find a reason like more money or a bigger dick to find a focal point for blame as a way to not look at personal responsibility.

There's another segment of readership that I can't understand. They somehow get off on reading or writing about the pain, humiliation, and betrayal of others. I can't imagine that they have been hurt but perhaps they have. It's my impression that they are younger, may never have had a meaningful relationship, and have no sympathy or empathy for the suffering of others. To me, this approaches sociopathy. I wonder if this is more of a character trait of Generation Xers or Millennials.

Each of us comes to these stories with our own context and agenda and no one agenda trumps another.

I allowed myself to get drawn into this discussion not by the story itself but by the flame war between the author and commenters, which I found sad. SJP is one of the most talented writers on literotica and certainly one of the most prolific. I don't read most of her stories because they are not about subjects that hold my interest. But in reading the most recent comments it is painful to real an author go after her/his readership because they don't like the themes or content. It's gauche and it's very low rent.

I also object to the dismissal of comments because the commenter has not submitted a story to the site. Readers and readers' opinions are gold and should be held in high esteem. Of course there is a lot of chaff in with the grain but it can easily be ignored. The accomplished and confident author lets the negative and ad hominem be blown away. No need to respond.

(Hell on SJP's gun piece she attacked me for agreeing with her)

SJP's very first comment on this story set the tone for that which followed. The subsequent comments prompted me to vote 1* without reading much of the piece. The vitriol and hubris the gushed out of the author's comments earned that 1* from me. Absent the flames, I would not have voted at all. After getting involved in the exchange I did read the story, or as much of it as I could handle, and it's not SJP's best work, in my opinion.

Susan is a very very good writer but the flame war was way beneath her.

Walking wounded or the boring genre

I am not walking wounded. Simple I found BORING and TIRESOME the more than 2000 years old genre from the antiq authors through the mediaval time until the almost the nowdays. The central genre the humorous (Boccaccio) or tragic (Flaubert/Tolsztoy) cheating wives with the obnoxiouse husbands etc genre.
I arrived from the SciFi & Fantasy to the LW. I read a story from sirreadsalot10 where against the usual (known by me only until sirreadsalot10's story) author habit a cheated husband became the main character and the positive hero. The title of his story is "Outlander". It was revelation to encounter a story where the main hero is a husband who just caught his wife with a stranger man in the birthday of his wife.....the start is clishe but the husband became a running husband with high level blood alcohol concentration and he moves through a wormhole to another stellar system in our Galaxy. He founds himself in a Civilization to where the Roanok island people arrived earlier, the time flows 4 times slowlier than on the Earth. He find himself in a struggle and to help them. The author shows well the passing pain for the cheating wife and the hero becomes ready for new woman. Sirreadsalot10 stopped to write his serial in 2011 and I looked for Lit and other story collections where his story was published. He disappeared for 4 years. I found a story in my whole life where a humuliated husband from a cheating wife became positive hero in a story and the author shows his healing up from the betrayal to prepare himslf for newer connection to woman.
I avoided the LW before. My sampling was negative I found some cuck stories and I do not find my nowdays favorite first. When sirreadsalot disapeared accidentaly I found stories where the cheated husbands were the successful after the divorce and simple I found a new genre after more than 2000 (two thousand) years the BTB and (the wide meaning) Consequence stories. It may be the BTB and Consequence stories are about 10% of the contain of the LW, BUT DEAR READERS AND AUTHOR FELLOWS THE BTB AND CONSEQUENCE STORIES WHERE THE CHEATED HUSBANDS BECOME SUCCESSFUL ARE NEW GENRE IN THE FOLKLOR LITERATURE AS THE LITEROTICA AND THE OTHER STORY COLLECTION ARE! Not only in the folklor literature but in the high literature this genre is rare!
I am not walking wounded soul but I find the usual cheating extramarital sex, cuckolding, wife sharing stories to be hackneyed boring genre and the few BTB-Consequence stories became interesting brand new genre..........PEOPLE MORE THAN 2000 YEARS NOBODY WROTE SUCH STORIES UNTIL NOWDAYS!!!!!!!!
I am not moraly against the cheating but I stand on mutuality. If somebody cheats the other spouse gets the green light to be not 100% fair. I enjoyed Longhorn_07 "Fool Me Once" and Mitchfren "Bailing Out" stories where the not 100% fair answer was to the cheating wife the exwife and (loverboy) life in prison to be innocent!
I think it is a modern romantic that an ex husband heals up from the cheating and he finds happiness again.
Do not remember the successful ex husband after getting rid of the cheating wife is a VERY NEW STORY GENRE AFTER 2500 YEARS!
BTW The new way of saying: to live alone not too good BUT IT IS BETTER THAN TO LIVE IN A WRONG MARRIAGE (as a cheating wife!)!

I am sorry exactly!

Exactly again: Do not remember the successful ex husband after getting rid of the cheating wife stories to read before this is a VERY NEW STORY GENRE AFTER 2500 YEARS!
BTW The new way of saying: to live alone not too good BUT IT IS MUCH BETTER THAN TO LIVE IN A WRONG MARRIAGE (as a cheating or cuckolding wife!)!

I am sorry again

I go to sleep. Exactly again: I do not remember I read stories about successful ex husbands after getting rid of the cheating wife before this is a VERY NEW STORY GENRE AFTER 2500 YEARS!

I hope you understand me last.

BTW Virtualy this new genre is the fruit of the life of the XXIst Century.

To SJP (again)

I seem to have upset you. I apologise. It's probably best for both of us if I don't read any more of your stories.

Thank you

Thank you, Twenty-seven for not reading any more of my stories. That's the nicest thing you've written to me.

Have a wonderful day.

Misleading Title

You are clearly a talented writer, that is not in question. My issue with what is going on here is that there is an expectation set with the title of the story.

The first installment follows along with the cheating wife / cuckold husband theme, with a bit of lusting after the daughter thrown in. The second is an unrelated mother/son story, and the third is a distantly related mother/son story (only related because the "mother" happens to be the cheating wife). I am not going to continue reading because I'm actually not interested in the mother/son theme... I'm interested in the cheating wife / cuckold husband theme.