A Bus Journey to Remember

?????? So what happens next?????

Damn

I hope you update soon this is so good!

oh f'n wow

Very wonderful hot story... well written.. Love to have been her.. even though... more please

wow

More please

Really good

Write more.

Not bad

Good story hope you are going to do more with it ..

i need more!

Thank you for sharing this story. I loved it and I can't wait for anything else that you have.

Great !

Sequel please

Hottest story ive read in a while, great work!

Worked for me!

Yum.

A bunch of jerks

I wonder if her father will ask for seconds, I would.

i like this.

It was great, I hope there's more on the way.

Great and hot

I agree..... Sequel please!!

CLEVER AN DSEXY

I enjoyed your short quick read. Exciting as it was the early on development was very good, Not a lot of in depth emotional content simply an unfolding of the plot. Good job.

More to cum?

With daddy get another go?

Unusually well written

Loved the way you described their bodies felt and moved. Very hot and satisfying!

Good

But sounds a lot like stranger on a train by Ashson except it's the father and not a stranger.
Stiil having sex with other people around not knowing what is going on is hot.

Somehow seems unlikely!

How embarrassing. ;)

Fucking my daddy like this is my ultimate fantasy! Please write more :)

love these stories

I love the "sitting on lap" stories, as the provide a guilt free way of family members fucking, coupled with the thrill of potentially being caught.

Also loved how you left it open at the end, when they need to come to grips with the fact that they just fucked.

Very good story. Well written. 5*s

Fuck

I would fuck that bitch

Super hot. Love the emotions expressed.

Nice story

When are you going to add more chapters to this story.

Amazing o-o

One of the best storries I have ever read and amazingly written, 5 stars!!!

Hot

Super hot. I love that it was all an accident. Hope you write more soon.

Next part please

Very hot-what happens next

Hot Damn

I always keep coming back to this hot and steamy piece. What can I say? Five stars.

Hot

I must have read this story at least 10 times, every time I need to cum and quickly, I come back to this story and it gets me wet and orgasming in no time.. I really wish you'd write some more ^^

:)

excellent work! :D

So very well written

This has to be the best story I've read. It's my go-to so often, and gets me there every time.
It's that innocent little fantasy that allows for the taboo, and still remains sexy as hell.
Well done!

Wow that almost made me cum without any stimulation, my cock is still rock hard!