All Comments on 'Sexual Sacrifice Pt. 02'

I like the storyline so far longer keep up the good work

My only complaint is there a little short. Other then that I love it so far.

Its a bit "different".I will read a few more pages,(not really chapters) to see how it goes,,but,,more than a 2 minute read,might help keep the readers attention better,,im still on the fence,,so can go either way,,

Fun. Would love to see more. Maybe what happens when his mom and sister show up? :)

Very good to read. Would love to read about what happens when his mom an sister are around. :)

There is more to come right?????

Again fantastic chapter, sure your next chapter will be fantastic like this chapter. Keep up the good work.

Chapter 3 is in the works, Feedback has been seen. Chapters will be a bit longer from now on.

To much like a rape story.