Tristan's Tale Pt. 04

Find Publisher. Now.

Please. That, or provide a link through which one can donate either to you personally or to a charitable cause of your choosing!

Lovely

Please write a book, these are fantastic.

What the fuck did I just read?

And why the fuck was it not on my bookshelves in a nice leather binding?

And why the fuck was it FREE?

Seriously, dude. I just read all four installments non-stop. This is awesome stuff.

Find a publisher that was amazing

Absolutely amassing story I couldn't put it down I ended up not sleeping as I just read it through the night. Can't wait for the next part

Well done!

A unique story well told - please continue!

Pls I can't wait for part 5!

Great!

While I guess many have blown into that same horn:

An excellent read, a great story, ginormous setting with tons of promise,
characters with lots of inner motivation, with lots of that hidden away;
short: all the good spices for yet another bunch of highly entertaining chapters that show us more of Tristan's tale, and the world he got thrown in...

Outstanding!

Can't wait for 5

Chi

Fucking broadsword yes please

Fantastic Writing! Moving, Thought provoking, Joyful!

Wow! A joy to read, Fun! Often poetic. Erotica on occasion. Exciting, some times sad, always wanting more.... great gratitude and appreciation for such a delightful read. THANK YOU! !!!

Just wow

Amazing story line that could just keep going and going. Can't wait to see what you have in store for us! Hope to see another 30 pages :)

Wow!

Couldn't stop reading! More, please and Thank you very much!

Awesome

Great story, can't wait for the next installment

Awesome story

Can hardly wait for the next installment! Thanks for a great story!

I love the development of the story so far.
The mc is engaging, and you managed to keep me guessing about how the story would develop and have surprised me in various instances.
I hope you keep writing this amazing story.

I'm dying for the tale to continue....

I dearly hope you will complete this saga! It's a wonderful story. Thank you

Beautiful

Thank you for this story. The way you described the feelings between the characters was nothing short of poetry. Oh, to feel that connection between another person that lets you know that you are alive! Please, continue the story. I have not been able to put it down.

Thanks for the January update

I understand feeling mired down in the minutia of your beautiful world. You've built more than one path for this to go and multiple arcs. Maybe just concentrate on his training before working on the story of Shae's war.

Please tell me there is more

I've really enjoyed this story line, but I hope this is not the end of the story!

Wow

Simply the best story I have read on this site. Couldn't put it down!

More please . . .

A great read and look forward to the next installment!

anxiously waiting

for the next installment. this story is wonderful

Just Amazing

Absolutely incredible. I couldn't stop reading. I've never left a comment on this site, but I just had to for this story. You truly have a gift. I would buy this if it was a book!

More..

I simply want more. To me, this story started very basically as a stroke story and since has evolved and took on a life of its own. You have created a very fun and interesting world and I just want more of it. Awesome work

Incredible

This is the first post I have ever left - this story is rich and interesting with a great plot and character development. I can't wait for the next installment. Keep up the great work.

good story badluck

Just these idiots write a magnificent story and abandon them ,if they don't have any interest to continue, I don't understand why they start to write in the first place shit
Another great story looks to be abandoned if not them at least let us know you are alive

sorry about that outburst

I am so sorry about that outbursts don't mind them I'd be happy if you would Al least give us some update as when it'll be out
Your greatest fan
Blazing_Phoenix

An amazing story worthy of publishing!

This is one of the best stories I have read in a long time. Feels like a mix between Ender's Game/ Harry Potter/ and the Order Mage series. I would love to donate to the author if they have a PayPal or other donation method. The author should also consider self-publishing a novel. I would buy the entire Tristan series in a heart beat. A solid 5 star story!

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Great stuff

Just read the whole thing in 2 days. Awesome story that just keeps getting better and better. Cant wait for more :D

It needs to continue!

Enjoyed all four parts of this story very much and can only hope you continue with part five in the very near future. I'm holding out for Tristan and Jade to find the happiness they both seem to have for each other, but I'm also interested in how Tristan faces the conflicts with other at the school, (i.e., Derrick, Jet, Emmitt, etc). Please feel free to let me know if you have plans to continue, I'll keep checking back if you don't.

One day my wish will be granted!

I've just finished reading this series for the umpteenth time and it keeps getting better as I pick up more nuances in the relationships. It is my fervent hope that one day, perhaps the next time I read the story again, the 5th chapter will be available. Please keep writing as this story deserves to be told.

Please Don't Stop!

This is one of the best, well written, stories on this site.
Like another, I've spent every spare moment of the last two days absorbing all four parts.
I wait with 'bated breath for the release of Part 5.

Anxious for the next part

Although this series would lend itself more towards regular literature than erotica, I have enjoyed how well written it is, the detail and descriptions and the development of the characters. I am anxious to read more, you certainly left me hanging... Thanks for the good read.

very good read

I am very impressed with the writing quality and the vivid descriptions of both the sex and the fantasy aspect .

Amazing story

I am truly enjoying the joyride. Especially the imagery .Truly a shining story. Please continue and complete it.

Good luck

Right now you are in fist place for the story

Best story on the site

This is a great story wroth amazing imagery. I cannot wait for the next installment.

Tristan's Tale rocks!

And Jet is the best character.

All one could want...

As another writer here let me offer my congratulations on a fantastically well done tale. Complex but coherent, alluring but not crass; this is one of the finest of the hundreds of thousands of stories here.

Well done!

asianToy

This is my second reading...

of this chapter as I just found the next and wanted to catch up. Its been sooo long. I was desolated when the series seemed to have finished without finishing the story.
This really is one of the best, so different yet so believable. Thank you.

Awesome. .

Excellent plot line that moves well. Always interesting and very hard to stop reading. You have the beginnings of an excellent epic novel

Wow

I'm stumbling a bit as I try to gather my thoughts... so very much is going on!

There is this young, nervous, reluctant hero who does the right thing even when it is almost certainly self-destructive. This same person is quite often a typical male-pig who thinks 110% with his dick. The same person who leaps at the opportunity to impress people in places of authority, yet regularly scoffs at rules and order... and the dichotomies stretch on.
Quite the complex character, and one that I am most intrigued with.
Jason

This need to be a book

This whole tale needs to be on my bookshelf. This story is using The Art to make me unable to put it down.

Whhaaaaattttt????/

How am I reading this on a dirty stories web site? This is good enough to be in the fantasy section of my library. Publish please!

This needs to be a book series. Such well crafted verbage!

Still Amazing

Wondering What will happen next, So, He is "another one" Bound for Greatness, Eh

Still, I expect it will screw with his life concepts even more.

Ramjet57

Scar

Rey well written but I keep thinking atristan should have a lightning-shaped scar...

Coming Into Its Own

There reaches a point - probably early chapter three - where something about this story clicks, and it goes from being relatively generic (if well written) to something much more distinctly yours. The characters, the settings, the dynamics... they all suddenly seem more vibrant, more real. Ironic, considering how fantastical the setting becomes. As a reader, you can feel the heart and investment there, and it shows a real authorial talent. Mind Control is regularly pretty gaudy - a thin excuse for NonCon and similar kinks - but you'be managed to avoid that, or at least expose it for what it is when it does occur, and that deserves credit.

Perhaps my one criticism does lie in those earlier chapters, where the story is a little more generic, the characters more cookie cutter (at least in comparison to chapter three on), and how quickly Tristan seems to move on from his past. It's a brief flash of rage, quiet acceptance and rarely considered in depth again. The disconnect and the transition between these two sections feels a little awkward as a result. Of course, it could all be Shae's manipulation (possibly my favourite character - beautifully ambiguous), in which case, all part of the plan!

Tl;dr nice world bro, keep it up!

Bravo!

Great story. Well written. Presented nicely. Lyn