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Santa Jesus Rachel and Me
It was an odd comnbination of things and yet it works. It hits the nail on the head of that sad, yearning feeling that even the most loved person gets in the midst of the festivities. I lliked the odd combination of including Jesus although I think it would have worked out better if it were longer and his part was better explained but hey! it was your fantasy on a one to 5 you got a five for origionality, thought and putting it together so well but who would have expected less.
another great story
captures the feeling of loneliness and love and everything.
lol
Hilarious!
Rich, sweet, hot--an apple pie of a story
This is excellent--beautifully written, of course, but rich and sweet and profound and touching, too. Mabeuse sees the gorgeous gigantic gift the world is to our minds, and shows us what he sees. Thank you.
Lovely
I settled in for a funny story to laugh with, and got so much more. I did get humor, of course. But I also got sweetness and that delicious ache of wistfulness, desire, and regret. And I got hot sex, as well. Who could ask for anything more?
Cheers ciaddict!
I'm with ya on that: who could ask for anything more?
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