Been enjoying this entire series. Keep up the good work!
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Anonymous08/27/15
Reporterette?
Is that like Actorette? Why not just call them reporters (as you have "slipped" a couple of times) rather than make up words? Besides 'ette' is usually an ending that means small rather than female. Other than that, I like the stories.
by
Anonymous09/17/16
Divorce
Out of nowhere Todd and His wife are divorcing. Just a few stories ago they were talking about becoming swingers. That is another issue I have. You need to take time to develop that story instead of springing it on us. When you don't it loses believability.
Todd is really upset that his wife is seeing his father behind his back? Not a good reason since they fuck other people.
English
Nice Work
Been enjoying this entire series. Keep up the good work!
Reporterette?
Is that like Actorette? Why not just call them reporters (as you have "slipped" a couple of times) rather than make up words? Besides 'ette' is usually an ending that means small rather than female. Other than that, I like the stories.
Divorce
Out of nowhere Todd and His wife are divorcing. Just a few stories ago they were talking about becoming swingers. That is another issue I have. You need to take time to develop that story instead of springing it on us. When you don't it loses believability.
Todd is really upset that his wife is seeing his father behind his back? Not a good reason since they fuck other people.
This was easy
Susan is the killer, had to be a woman that both women trusted and Donald made a point of not excluding women...
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