Hilarious! Sat and giggled all the way through.
Gaucho does a really nice job of entertaining. A joy to read. Im glad he writes...wish he did more.
I haven't read the winning entry yet, but I can't imagine that it's better than this! Congratulations.
This was so wonderful! I tried to stop reading until my husband could be in the room also, as this is how we prefer to read the stories on this site, but I just couldn't refrain. Thanks for a great laugh. I also read the winning entry and I agree with the other posters that this is much better.
Discouraged a bit from the winning entry (which I found lacking) I thought twice about opening this story. When I did I laughed from the beginning. How the hell did you get it all to rhyme? Kudos to you hun. This was top rate in my book!
Only those of us who truly use this site often could possibly understand how hysterically accurate it is in describing us all...but I certainly know that I laughted my ass off from beginning to end!!! So glad you wrote it. Thank You!!!
(That's all I can rhyme, for my mouse ball is loose.)
Seriously though, Seussing it is always a fun style - glad to see it now and again.
(hope yanking off that duct tape didn;t hurt too much!)
Damn, man! This was AWESOME! Although a bit messed up, this story brought a smile to my face. Incredibly well written and thought out. There is seriously nothing I can say but good things. And to have stretched this so long without having a decreasing amount of amazing-ness..... you have talent. The detail and time you put in was well worth it. Seuss (if more perverted.... Well, who knows, he might have been some privately worshiped sex god) would be impressed.
In conclusion, I'm mind blown, and that doesn't happen easily.
23 :D's / 23 :D's
First full score of :D's I have given out, so keep up this brilliant work of yours!!
~~ LaLaLadidahGirl ~~
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