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good story, but not ending
Loved the story but not the ending. I still read all your stories, and have been happy with the ones I have read, but this one The ending is a little off for me. Hope you keep writing for I will be looking for the next one to show.
NICE BUT A VERY BAD ENDING
The story was nice, most of your stories are very nice. This one fell a little short and the ending was not even close.
Unusual, and Good, Story
I didn't have any trouble with the story ending, but then I can appreciate a realistic ending, which I thought this was, and don't need "everything became a bed of roses" ending each time. Life isn't like that, and it obviously wasn't like that for the main character of this story. So I found this realistic and even instructive. It's not like the guy died or anything.
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