a new story by the great HA. What I love is the boy's reaction to the best thing a son can ever see--the beautiful, inviting hole between his mother's legs.The same hole he came out of 18 or 20 or whatever years ago as a little baby. His own mother's vagina. She "pulled her labia apart, giving me a clear view of her clitoris and vaginal opening. Her brown labia was spread wide. Her clit looked engorged. Her insides were pink and wet. She was spread so wide, I could see the deep hole." Her son's awed reaction: "It looks gorgeous." Mothers who show their own boy their mommy-hole are the best, most loving moms of all. Boys have lots of different names for it and they love saying them to themselves. "Mom's beautiful vagina." "My own mother's cunt." "My mother's clutching cunt." "Mom's warm wet twat." "My mommy's tasty twat." "Mom's babyhole." "The twat I came out of." "Her baby boy's favorite hole." "The loving home of her own boy's penis." "Where her boy's penis just fucking belongs." "Her son's semen catcher." "Where I blow my balls every damn chance I get." And that's only in English. Great story, HA. Thanks, and five stars of course.
Though it felt a little 'cold' when the mother was doing the legal stuff, the rest of it was beautifully paced, well-written, eloquent and a bloody good read.
I liked the story a great deal. The plot was straight forward, and the main characters were well described. From my perspective the build up was too long, about two pages, and the sex scene(s) too short. Nevertheless, it was well written with great dialogue, and the slow build up to the sex scene is preferred by many. Even though flawed from my view it is a good and well written story. "I'm still hopping to meet such a confident MILF.
The writing was superb and the long buildup was great. Once the buildup was over, though, it would have been better if the sex we patiently waited for had been longer. More descriptive dialogue would have been good, too. I didn't know the child was a guy until the end of page one. We never knew his name. Lastly, more information as to how big the mom's tits were or how big his cock was would have helped paint a clearer picture in my mind.
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Anonymous08/23/15
The only thing I didn't like was the title...
Made it sound like a lesbian incest story, which I was looking forward to. Great story, though!
This is a super story, it is well written and very believable. I would love to read a followup.
by
Anonymous08/24/15
Awesome
well written and horny like to see him take on the law staff
by
Anonymous08/24/15
THIS WAS A WINNER
I agree with a previous writer that the title had a Lesbian inclination but either way I would have read this story. Your writing is consistently more interesting than 90 % of those brave enough to post and request reader feedback.
As to a section I enjoyed most in the work, I have two which I enjoyed. When you wrote of his mother's modesty coming in from the patio wearing a bikini top with shorts I really enjoyed this. A simple paragraph which adds excitement to reading your work. That touch of humanity thought process you apply to a story makes them so much better.
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Anonymous08/24/15
Good Story
Enjoyed the read, but, so impersonal and loveless. Sex is more than a "Contract" it's about feelings for each other. I felt she used him like a dildo. She had no thoughts for her son until her friend said she had done it with hers. Almost as if she was trying to fit in and impress her friend.
You are an excellent writer, keep up the good work !
It took me about a page to figure out the narrator was male.
When I was 18 years old, I wouldn't have lasted 10 seconds in a situation like that. I came the first time I gave oral sex to a woman, but maybe that's just how I am.
You Sir are a very talented writer, the buildup story leading to the sex act was great writing.
The only downside is that the sex content was minimal
I'd really appreciate if you could write another chapter, thanks.
Very captivating and arousing and satisfying indeed.
No objections your honor.
Bravo!
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Anonymous10/20/15
Mom made same offer
This story brings back memories. I too grew up just Mom and me, but my mom was my grandfathers secretary at his heavy-equipment leasing outfit. Dad was like, never.
But my mom is a real firecracker. She's short, just 5'2", very pretty, button-nosed, blonde-haired thing on a skinny legged frame. Her name is Melanie, but shes known as Dolly because..., she has Dolly Parton sized tits!
Because we live in avocado growing country in Homestead, South Florida (just west of Miami), it's hot year-round. She owns (and we still live in) a large ranch-style with an attached offset 3.5 car garage L-shaped home with a closed 6ft. wooden slat-board fence completing our square live-in area with a screen enclosure over our in-ground pool. V-e-r-y private.
Homestead being farm country means our nearest neighbor is (still) a half mile in either direction. Friends were driven to me or I dropped off to them. Nice and quiet.
Since it was just us two in the hot weather, we live out by the pool more year round than in the house..., (except for July and August when we turn on the A/C.)
I've always walked around in my boxers but since I was young mom walked around topless. Whenever she was home, she was thong bikini and topless. I remember I would ask my friends moms why weren't they topless - until mom gave me the 'talk'.
I always knew when mom would want to sunbathe (on weekends) and, of course, I wanted to as well. We would slather each other up with sun lotion. We'd play grabass and through the years I was 'allowed' access to her tits, though I didn't know I had get permission. I never did, I just hugged and squeezed mom's body whenever I wanted to, which is still often.
Discretion was now an every day 'reminder' but once a month on a weekend was spent on Pop's 37-ft Sea-Ray Sundancer with Twin Diesel stern drive. Pop's is very proud of that boat. It sleeps six but its always been just family on it. Mom and Mams (grandma) topless, and Pops and me in our trunks..., usually.
Mams had mom at 15 and mom had me at 15 with Pops being 10 years older than Mams. Mams is large breasted as well so its the only lifestyle I've known. Short, pretty, and never-see-your-toes breasted!
Except for the slathering on of SPF all-over each other's parts there was no overt sex on the boat..., ever!
But the day would come when mom and I would start having sex.
And when it DID happen It seemed so natural that it actually didn't 'hit' me until we were fucking 3/4 times a day for two months! Dude..., I was absolutely 'RAILING' my own fucking mom!
We knew we were always attracted to one another and (afterwards) mom revealed to me that she knew when I was 'ready'..., 'it' would just happen. Mom, Mel, as I call her, has an almost constant sexy 'bedroom eyes' look about her that to this day sends me in fitful rages of lust upon which I just 'take' her right there - whever we are - and we've been some pretty public places!
So, sure enough we had come home from a day of boating and fishing, exhausted with our usual all-over tans. We laid down naked together (something we two house nudists do all the time) on the two-man outdoor futon. We instantly both fell asleep. I awoke with my hard wedged against mom's little ass. Again, my 'woodys' were a regular occurance around the house and though there was touching, there had never been genital penetration - until now.
Apparently my hard was wedged in her ass cheeks at just the right angle with just the right amount of friction when she forcefully moved her ass against me I slid all the way into her pussy - to the hilt(!) because she was still sopping wet from our sunbathing earlier, and her seemingly constant of arousal around me.
There was no panic from either of us though we woke up instantly. She turned her head and smiling at me just groaned as I instinctively started side humping into her, smiling. She was wet and tight, but she was soo-o-o wet, it was so warm and velvety, I knew I wouldn't last long.
She gradually turned onto her stomach as I continued to pile drive into my gorgeous, G cup breasted mom's sloppy, wet pussy from behind.
She started orgasming because I felt the involuntary squeezing around my very fat 7" cast-iron cock. We were mutually moaning each others contentment when I felt the boiling in my balls and mom started to convulse, though she was fighting it like I was when suddenly mom yelled, "Let it blow, baby!"
Just the earthy-gritty, sexiness gutteral scream in which she grunted at me at the same time every muscle in her very being felt like they were tightened around my hard as rock cock had its desired effect...
I grimaced as I thrust deep into moms pussy, feeling instant relief from my internal systolic pressure as (it seemed) must be gallons of cum loped and spewed forth into her pussy from above and behind.
Ohhhh! Ohhhhh! we both kept saying in unison and then..., collapse.
We awoke from our mutual unconscious state a half our later! Me still on top, my cock still in her pussy. We managed to move to our side again while still attached and we hugged, talked, and laughed for another 45 minutes before we got up and showered outside, deeply kissing, and hugging.
Mom said that even with her on birth-control there was SO much cum in her pussy, she MUST be pregnant!
I (remember) I looked at her with a questioning face and said, "Mom, I didn't know you were on birth control, I've seen you turn down every guy (but not girl!) who's ever begged to date, er, fuck you! Why would you be on birth control?
Mom turned and looked up at me, smiled and then said sexily, "So Pops doesn't knock me up!"
by
Anonymous03/24/16
Lusting for more
Awesome story! Plausible premise and horny awakening that worked well.
It ended too soon...
Another installment please (that's what she said).
by
Anonymous05/10/16
chuk says
Excellent story - u brought it along at a slow and complete pace. Tks
I want to read more of ur writings.
I loved this story; the pace, the characters, and the story line. All of the legalese regarding contracts was different. She was obviously a mom that considered this for awhile after talking to her friend, and didn't just start fucking her son. Unlike another commenter, she made it clear that this was a mutual reward contract. She wasn't just using him as a dildo. I would have liked a little more description during the sex, but what do I know, you are the accomplished writer.
On another note, others are always asking for more chapters because you make us care about the characters on a number of fronts. I too would like to know what happens to the characters later, but, I kind of like your style of building a story with a beginning, a middle, and an end. You can always build another stand alone story that will continue the story with a minimum of reviewing the facts, possibly referencing the earlier story. I hate stories that don't end, and then we have to wait days, weeks, or months to get the next installment. Maybe never.
Looking at your library of stories shows that you must have a winning style. I know that I will be reading the rest of your stories... possibly even the categories that don't normally appeal to me.
English
what a treat
a new story by the great HA. What I love is the boy's reaction to the best thing a son can ever see--the beautiful, inviting hole between his mother's legs.The same hole he came out of 18 or 20 or whatever years ago as a little baby. His own mother's vagina. She "pulled her labia apart, giving me a clear view of her clitoris and vaginal opening. Her brown labia was spread wide. Her clit looked engorged. Her insides were pink and wet. She was spread so wide, I could see the deep hole." Her son's awed reaction: "It looks gorgeous." Mothers who show their own boy their mommy-hole are the best, most loving moms of all. Boys have lots of different names for it and they love saying them to themselves. "Mom's beautiful vagina." "My own mother's cunt." "My mother's clutching cunt." "Mom's warm wet twat." "My mommy's tasty twat." "Mom's babyhole." "The twat I came out of." "Her baby boy's favorite hole." "The loving home of her own boy's penis." "Where her boy's penis just fucking belongs." "Her son's semen catcher." "Where I blow my balls every damn chance I get." And that's only in English. Great story, HA. Thanks, and five stars of course.
Superb!
Though it felt a little 'cold' when the mother was doing the legal stuff, the rest of it was beautifully paced, well-written, eloquent and a bloody good read.
Long build up
I liked the story a great deal. The plot was straight forward, and the main characters were well described. From my perspective the build up was too long, about two pages, and the sex scene(s) too short. Nevertheless, it was well written with great dialogue, and the slow build up to the sex scene is preferred by many. Even though flawed from my view it is a good and well written story. "I'm still hopping to meet such a confident MILF.
The writing was superb and the long buildup was great. Once the buildup was over, though, it would have been better if the sex we patiently waited for had been longer. More descriptive dialogue would have been good, too. I didn't know the child was a guy until the end of page one. We never knew his name. Lastly, more information as to how big the mom's tits were or how big his cock was would have helped paint a clearer picture in my mind.
The only thing I didn't like was the title...
Made it sound like a lesbian incest story, which I was looking forward to. Great story, though!
Thanks!
Hey All another great one deserving of 10 stars but I was only allowed to give 5! Great story line.
Amazing
This is a super story, it is well written and very believable. I would love to read a followup.
Awesome
well written and horny like to see him take on the law staff
THIS WAS A WINNER
I agree with a previous writer that the title had a Lesbian inclination but either way I would have read this story. Your writing is consistently more interesting than 90 % of those brave enough to post and request reader feedback.
As to a section I enjoyed most in the work, I have two which I enjoyed. When you wrote of his mother's modesty coming in from the patio wearing a bikini top with shorts I really enjoyed this. A simple paragraph which adds excitement to reading your work. That touch of humanity thought process you apply to a story makes them so much better.
Good Story
Enjoyed the read, but, so impersonal and loveless. Sex is more than a "Contract" it's about feelings for each other. I felt she used him like a dildo. She had no thoughts for her son until her friend said she had done it with hers. Almost as if she was trying to fit in and impress her friend.
You are an excellent writer, keep up the good work !
very sweet
Very good and sweet ending. Hope they become true lovers and share more till both swap rings. Hope mom enjoys a deeper Lesbian lifestyle.
Novel idea
I enjoyed that one.
Thank you
Good writing
It took me about a page to figure out the narrator was male.
When I was 18 years old, I wouldn't have lasted 10 seconds in a situation like that. I came the first time I gave oral sex to a woman, but maybe that's just how I am.
Interresting
I think the legalese wording and contract talk gave the sex an interresting new angle
oh man
great as always. how do you do it?
Awesome
You Sir are a very talented writer, the buildup story leading to the sex act was great writing.
The only downside is that the sex content was minimal
I'd really appreciate if you could write another chapter, thanks.
Lickin Lawyer
Very captivating and arousing and satisfying indeed.
No objections your honor.
Bravo!
Mom made same offer
This story brings back memories. I too grew up just Mom and me, but my mom was my grandfathers secretary at his heavy-equipment leasing outfit. Dad was like, never.
But my mom is a real firecracker. She's short, just 5'2", very pretty, button-nosed, blonde-haired thing on a skinny legged frame. Her name is Melanie, but shes known as Dolly because..., she has Dolly Parton sized tits!
Because we live in avocado growing country in Homestead, South Florida (just west of Miami), it's hot year-round. She owns (and we still live in) a large ranch-style with an attached offset 3.5 car garage L-shaped home with a closed 6ft. wooden slat-board fence completing our square live-in area with a screen enclosure over our in-ground pool. V-e-r-y private.
Homestead being farm country means our nearest neighbor is (still) a half mile in either direction. Friends were driven to me or I dropped off to them. Nice and quiet.
Since it was just us two in the hot weather, we live out by the pool more year round than in the house..., (except for July and August when we turn on the A/C.)
I've always walked around in my boxers but since I was young mom walked around topless. Whenever she was home, she was thong bikini and topless. I remember I would ask my friends moms why weren't they topless - until mom gave me the 'talk'.
I always knew when mom would want to sunbathe (on weekends) and, of course, I wanted to as well. We would slather each other up with sun lotion. We'd play grabass and through the years I was 'allowed' access to her tits, though I didn't know I had get permission. I never did, I just hugged and squeezed mom's body whenever I wanted to, which is still often.
Discretion was now an every day 'reminder' but once a month on a weekend was spent on Pop's 37-ft Sea-Ray Sundancer with Twin Diesel stern drive. Pop's is very proud of that boat. It sleeps six but its always been just family on it. Mom and Mams (grandma) topless, and Pops and me in our trunks..., usually.
Mams had mom at 15 and mom had me at 15 with Pops being 10 years older than Mams. Mams is large breasted as well so its the only lifestyle I've known. Short, pretty, and never-see-your-toes breasted!
Except for the slathering on of SPF all-over each other's parts there was no overt sex on the boat..., ever!
But the day would come when mom and I would start having sex.
And when it DID happen It seemed so natural that it actually didn't 'hit' me until we were fucking 3/4 times a day for two months! Dude..., I was absolutely 'RAILING' my own fucking mom!
We knew we were always attracted to one another and (afterwards) mom revealed to me that she knew when I was 'ready'..., 'it' would just happen. Mom, Mel, as I call her, has an almost constant sexy 'bedroom eyes' look about her that to this day sends me in fitful rages of lust upon which I just 'take' her right there - whever we are - and we've been some pretty public places!
So, sure enough we had come home from a day of boating and fishing, exhausted with our usual all-over tans. We laid down naked together (something we two house nudists do all the time) on the two-man outdoor futon. We instantly both fell asleep. I awoke with my hard wedged against mom's little ass. Again, my 'woodys' were a regular occurance around the house and though there was touching, there had never been genital penetration - until now.
Apparently my hard was wedged in her ass cheeks at just the right angle with just the right amount of friction when she forcefully moved her ass against me I slid all the way into her pussy - to the hilt(!) because she was still sopping wet from our sunbathing earlier, and her seemingly constant of arousal around me.
There was no panic from either of us though we woke up instantly. She turned her head and smiling at me just groaned as I instinctively started side humping into her, smiling. She was wet and tight, but she was soo-o-o wet, it was so warm and velvety, I knew I wouldn't last long.
She gradually turned onto her stomach as I continued to pile drive into my gorgeous, G cup breasted mom's sloppy, wet pussy from behind.
She started orgasming because I felt the involuntary squeezing around my very fat 7" cast-iron cock. We were mutually moaning each others contentment when I felt the boiling in my balls and mom started to convulse, though she was fighting it like I was when suddenly mom yelled, "Let it blow, baby!"
Just the earthy-gritty, sexiness gutteral scream in which she grunted at me at the same time every muscle in her very being felt like they were tightened around my hard as rock cock had its desired effect...
I grimaced as I thrust deep into moms pussy, feeling instant relief from my internal systolic pressure as (it seemed) must be gallons of cum loped and spewed forth into her pussy from above and behind.
Ohhhh! Ohhhhh! we both kept saying in unison and then..., collapse.
We awoke from our mutual unconscious state a half our later! Me still on top, my cock still in her pussy. We managed to move to our side again while still attached and we hugged, talked, and laughed for another 45 minutes before we got up and showered outside, deeply kissing, and hugging.
Mom said that even with her on birth-control there was SO much cum in her pussy, she MUST be pregnant!
I (remember) I looked at her with a questioning face and said, "Mom, I didn't know you were on birth control, I've seen you turn down every guy (but not girl!) who's ever begged to date, er, fuck you! Why would you be on birth control?
Mom turned and looked up at me, smiled and then said sexily, "So Pops doesn't knock me up!"
Lusting for more
Awesome story! Plausible premise and horny awakening that worked well.
It ended too soon...
Another installment please (that's what she said).
chuk says
Excellent story - u brought it along at a slow and complete pace. Tks
I want to read more of ur writings.
WOW
Another great story. Thank You.
a great contract
a great contract!
My mother seduced me at 15
Fantastic story much like my real life seduction.
Very good!
I loved it.
Another great story!
I loved this story; the pace, the characters, and the story line. All of the legalese regarding contracts was different. She was obviously a mom that considered this for awhile after talking to her friend, and didn't just start fucking her son. Unlike another commenter, she made it clear that this was a mutual reward contract. She wasn't just using him as a dildo. I would have liked a little more description during the sex, but what do I know, you are the accomplished writer.
On another note, others are always asking for more chapters because you make us care about the characters on a number of fronts. I too would like to know what happens to the characters later, but, I kind of like your style of building a story with a beginning, a middle, and an end. You can always build another stand alone story that will continue the story with a minimum of reviewing the facts, possibly referencing the earlier story. I hate stories that don't end, and then we have to wait days, weeks, or months to get the next installment. Maybe never.
Looking at your library of stories shows that you must have a winning style. I know that I will be reading the rest of your stories... possibly even the categories that don't normally appeal to me.
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