My Naughty Neighbour Ch. 02

Better and Better

The first part was good, this part is even better. Very good story and development. Cannot wait for the next part. Thanks for a great story and read.

Great chapter, a total cock hardener.

The tease is insane, very fun to read. Need chapter 3&4.

Wonderful story, I hope there is more to come!

Natural development

This is a natural development from part 1, and it seems more clearly that if it were in the fetish category, it might find more receptive readers.
Golden showers are not my thing, but I enjoyed the rest of the story immensely.
For a woman who does not want to fuck, Lynn is certainly pushing the envelope. The timing and action with the police seems a bit contrived, but the rest seemed realistic and erotic. I am not willing to buy that this is a true story, but the characters certainly seem to be real people.
Thanks for sharing.

Really enjoying your writing!

I'm sorry I won't log in to review, but I'm a girl and if I submit a review that men don't like, I get a lot of harassment, so please forgive me.

I started reading your Alex and Alexa story in another category and LOVED it. It's clearly fiction, this one I'm not so sure of. While I agree that some of the things happening might seem somewhat contrived, there's a an element to this that seems based on personal experience. Is Michael based at all on personal experiences of yours? He's hurting and I feel bad for him.

Lynn is every bit as sexy as your other female lead, Alexa. On top of that, she's mature and liberated, with a kinky side, seemingly. She could almost be a grown-up Alexa.

And don't think I didn't notice that both Lynn and Alexa are tall blonds with big tits and fabulous figures. I think your preference is showing. ;)

I'm really hoping that they fall in love, it seems inevitable, of course, but if this story, like I suspect, is somewhat based on reality, then who knows what will happen. I hope it's happy. Your sexy stories seem geared towards happy and there's nothing wrong with that!

Write on, sir!

- C

Wow

Never been a fetish of mine but the way you write I'd love to try this. Now I just need a handy milf.....4*