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this is sooooooooooooooo good!!
Read this one before you read anything else here
This is the best story I have read on this site and I read many of them, Thank you TFB for writing it, a wonderful tale, if just a little rushed in the final closing stage
too Effing long!
Why ruin a good marriage with x-dressing & femdom crap?
Drugging someone for sex is RAPE.
However this ridiculous story ends, to fuck someone by use of chemicals without their initial knowledge is rape, be it by lesbianism or a woman taking a man, just the same as it would be a man taking a woman. This story is obviously pure fantasy but it has serious disappointing femdom caused by constant drugging, just like you feed a heroin addict. 0 points is pointless as it does not go against the author but 1 does and brings down overall scores and that is my score 1*. "We guide our clients to establish their true character", NO you don't, you drug them.
I enjoyed this story tremendously
Even though the story is a fantasy, the underlying ideas resonated so well with me. We as people do not have a chance to explore ourselves nor have the trust in someone to say or explore our feelings. Your story has walked us through an experience that two people had with discovery. I would not like people to miss the point of the story and not see that lives could changed if they are willing to explore and able to experiece who they really are. Thanks for being an author that is willing to explore many experiences, especially those that relate to males. Keep writing.
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Had to quit after six pages, dialogue is stilted and unreal. Couldn't struggle through it any more. 1 star, sorry.
hmmmmmm
Really enjoyed this tale of discovery. Yes, it is a LONG story, and the use of drugs bothers me, but the learning that came about was interesting. The initial couple would probably ended up divorced from hiding in themselves. Again this is a Fastasy, but has the earmarks of everyday life around it. TFB thank you for the story and the thoughts in it and through it. God I hope the ranch did well to afford all the kids. Sex isn't the answer to all things but sure beats the hostle buildup without it. GP
Really liked it
I really liked it although I found it a little bit of tough going at times.
YOU GO AWAY YOU ANNONY ASSHOLE
WE'RE HERE TO STAY AND YOU SHOULD JUST DIE!!!!!!
Thanks to the other commenters . . .
for alerting me to a drug rape event. Didn't need to read past the first page to determine this was going to be a fantasy about an innocent couple being used and abused, under the guise of "enlightenment," or "expanding their horizons." What makes humans superior to animals is not only our intellectual prowess, but also our moral/ethical prohibitions. Take a sharp intellect and remove the morality and you end up with a Hitler, Caligula, or Osama bin Laden; monsters. Since I haven't read what your monsters do to this couple I cannot comment on who well written it is. But I can ask, why write about such cruel inhuman behavior, when we have a world of it taking place in real life? Just seems sad for an aspiring writer to delve into a world that celebrates inhumanity toward others. At least I hope you have the monsters die in the end.
I agree with last comments
I got to page 8 because I was waiting for a twist, then looked at the pages to come, 22. I could only see another 14 pages of bullying and shame forced on the victims so fast forwarded to page 22. No twist just disgust. Still, saves reading any more of this writers trash. TK
AMAZING MASTER PIECE!!!!!
Congrats ;)
The only fag shit on here is dear annony!!
gave it a 5
1*
VOTE 1* FOR EVERY STORY RATED BY THAT TRANNY BITCH FOOL VASTIESMITH2 AKA BONNIETAYLOR2 AKA ANON!
Disappointing.
I look forward to your stories Texasfarmboy. Your forte is writing stories about attractive decent intelligent people doing interesting things in interesting circumstances. This Isn't' one of them. The characters are selfish and dumb.
A FANTASY.
As a fantasy it was fun. Everyone Had an identity crises. But hey it was a fantasy an as such it was fun a good laugh 5 stars.
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