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Innocents Pt. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/22/15

Post as gay when gay

Please post as gay when your story is gay. SyFi theme or not, the sexual theme is gay.

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by observer708/22/15

Fuck you, homophobe

Sci fi theme can be posted in sci fi if she bloody well wants. Fuck tard.

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by Anonymous08/22/15

One page

You can't say it's a gay theme. One page in and we've only met ,
,2 characters in a sci-fi setting that has promise. Unless you're the author you have no clue what is coming. So stuff it

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by Anonymous08/22/15

for the life...

of me, I cannot find anything in this tale that even hints at "gay"...look within yourself for an answer

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by Anonymous08/22/15

Great potential

Gay or not, I don't care. Doesn't have the tag, and I trust the author to make the right choice abt that.

That aside, this story has some awesome potential. Great setup, and it's left really open-ended. Write well, and we'll keep reading :)

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by Anonymous08/23/15

If their is going to be any Ma/Ma etc. please either put it in the Gay Male section, or put a warning or something before your story. Because although im fine with people being gay, reading gay sex scenes or something similar makes me immediately hate the story no matter how good the writing

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by observer708/23/15

That's really pathetic...stop lying to yourself, Anon

If your are "fine" with peopple being gay, if you are "fine" with reading gay scenes...yet if you find one, you "immediately hate it no matter how good the writing"....ehhhhh....something does not compute?

A warning is fair. For the weak of heart, you know.

But you know, also, right, that there is a huge, huge market and presence of WOMEN writing gay male stories that are as accurate for a real gay couple as the bodice ripper romance Cinderella hetero story is to a real hetero couple, right? They don't care. They find it hot, just as many straight guys find "lesbian" (not really lesbian but women performing for men's entertainment) porn hot.

It is called Yaoi, and that is what this lady is writing. Look it up and educate yourself. This is for women to read and enjoy. It is not all about the fearful man worrying about someone touching his bum. It is not all about you, contrary hypocrit.

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by MsMahler08/30/15

Thanks for the supportive comments

I admit I hadn't thought of this story as yaoi before, and as yet I have no idea what relationship these two will end up having, but if the word fits....

No real plans for this yet, Falthro is a minor character in my novel who stood up and demanded his own story. This is what I got. Glad folks are enjoying it. There's at least 2 more parts coming, then we'll see what happens.


As far as the idea that I should tag every story with two male characters interacting m/m--when every single m/f story on this site gets tagged m/f, I'll start tagging my non-sexual m/m. Until then I'm not going to reinforce the idiotic idea that m/f relationships are "normal" and everything else needs to bear a star of david so you can safely shun it.

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