I really love the plan that Evie and Karli have going to seduce her father! There crazy partners in crime and I'm really rooting for them. Daddy seems so flabbergasted by everything, he's no match for them, is he? I am enjoying the build-up and methodical steps she's talking to not scare him off but make him want her. If I ever wanted to seduce my father, I'm taking Evie's playbook with me.
Amazing, give me more!
- C7538
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Anonymous08/27/15
chapter 3?
I certainly hope there is a 3rd chapter in the works...
by
Anonymous08/27/15
pace
Great pacing of this story. Keeping the tension on, although the tension might have built better if in fact daddy could not cum on his own, and each session after being with his daughter or Karli ended in frustration for him. He actually climaxed this time, so some of the tension and rationale for him eventually succumbing to his daughter is lost. Good story and dialog though. Keep it coming.
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Anonymous08/29/15
H O T
You're killing me... I wish I had a pussy to rub
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Anonymous08/31/15
nick
Well written to show love .. Instead of drilling hole
English
Awesome!
I really love the plan that Evie and Karli have going to seduce her father! There crazy partners in crime and I'm really rooting for them. Daddy seems so flabbergasted by everything, he's no match for them, is he? I am enjoying the build-up and methodical steps she's talking to not scare him off but make him want her. If I ever wanted to seduce my father, I'm taking Evie's playbook with me.
Amazing, give me more!
- C7538
chapter 3?
I certainly hope there is a 3rd chapter in the works...
pace
Great pacing of this story. Keeping the tension on, although the tension might have built better if in fact daddy could not cum on his own, and each session after being with his daughter or Karli ended in frustration for him. He actually climaxed this time, so some of the tension and rationale for him eventually succumbing to his daughter is lost. Good story and dialog though. Keep it coming.
H O T
You're killing me... I wish I had a pussy to rub
nick
Well written to show love .. Instead of drilling hole
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