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by Sithspit09/07/15

Edit needed

Fun chapter; looks like you missed an "r" in one spot though: " Tugging the shit off, he licked her chest. "

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by Anonymous09/07/15

Lydia

Well she could start incorporating some of her staff tricks the easy to counter ones into a dance during her singing to add even more flare to her style.

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