All Comments on 'Dave Needs Help'

You havea gift pls continue to write!

That was the most erotic thing I have ever read. By the end I had cum three times and I'm still sweatin up a storm. Continue writing PLEASE!

This is the second story of yours I've read, and your word pictures place me in the room in each story ... yet both were more from a man's POV. Erotic, beautiful and very hot! Keep writing, and I think you'll enjoy your fame someday.

Wow, honey, wonderful writing kept me up.

Thank you

MORE PLEASE!!!

God it get's boring. Huge cocks are for huge holes which your heroine doesn't have

More Please!

Damn, I just came on my bed sheet!! That's an incredible story. Lovely_Emma_21, keep on writing to make people cum and cum and cum again!!

Want more? OMG YES!!! I like your style of writing, I love your idea's and your desires.....I'd love to hear about their next movie night. You have me hot and wanting to have movie night with my step-daughter. MMmmmmm...I certainly want to read more and hear more from you and your wonderful mind! Great story!!!

I totally enjoyed your stories, and cum to think of it... I may have to send you one of mine.

Very hot daddy-daughter sex. I love the oral. Can't wait for Nadine to eat daddy's cum. This is the first story I have read of yours - and will read them all. And, I will vote 5 stars.

Why does every male character on Literotica have to have a "monster cock", or a fat ten-incher, or whatever description the writer chooses for something that's unrealistic in real life. It would be nice, once in a while, to see the males just be normal, average sized guys.

The reason why everyone has a huge cock in these storys is because no one likes to read about tiny ass asain dick!

Just look at the facts. Story written in 2003, no comments till 2010, now several comments. Was'nt the story HOT earlier?

As regards the story, it is a bit short otherwise Okay.

Excellent father/daughter erotica. Nicely writtten. Very hot.

Great story had me hard from the start xx paul from uk

rigorous1@sky.

Had me touching myself from the start deffinately want to read more of this story

Yeah, I just started reading this story, and eating lunch at the same time; I would have j.o. ed if my hands hadn't been busy with the food.

Definetly one of my faves.

I've seen that movie. More than once. It was very good and not just the sex scenes. The suspense was good too. But yeah that hallway scene...whew! 👏👏👏

Just read your story Dave Needs Help, and I loved that it made me cum before page one was over, I love that my darling. XX Thank you, John

jbowling@ozemail.com.au

Than a woman and a man giving each other pleasure. Sounds like the daughter was just as horny as her dad!

That was a great story. I have just cum all over my chest and I am still hard.

who needs a movie.....just a willing daughter will do

Looooveed it

Short and sweet and hot as fuck

It was a good read thanks. Where are my fake cigarettes. Lol

My mind had two movies playing. One of the father and daughter. One of you touching yourself as you write, for such a hotness would have to be felt. Thank you.

Spontaneous and mutual pleasure. I could be Dave as far as the wife goes so that strikes a realistic chord with me.

This story was submitted to this great website 17 Years Ago! WOW

Great story. AAAAAA++++++

Doncha just love this kinda story? A really pleasant read . . . .