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Fill in Girlfriend: Anal Queen

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by Anonymous

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by 63lsmith08/25/15

REAL NICE

I loved it and would like to hear more about these 2. I think that a lot of coaches help young men to become real men. Wish it had happened to me, but I was and am overweight. The coaches I had always had eyes for the well built one, I do not know if they did anything with them, but they were very friendly with some of them.

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by CSK08/25/15

Editor Polish

This story, like its predecessor, was pretty good, but had the potential to be really good with more development and editing. Way too many spelling and grammar mistakes. While I know this isn't a detractor for some, for many it really is. Seamen instead of semen, chocked instead of choked, etc. I'd get an editor to look it over and then submit a revised version.

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by MakeMeScream91108/26/15

More please!!

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by Lovelove50609/22/15

Fucking loved it

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by Anonymous04/14/16

Wow

I wish I had a coach like that when I was in high school on the football team. I got so hard from your story. Very nice more if you don't mind maybe have another team member join them as well in a spit roast ummmmmm

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by Anonymous08/23/16

☆☆☆☆☆- (5-): Hardcore (Pornographic), Very Erotic!

Erotic

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by Anonymous02/27/17

Please do another!!!

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