I counted at least two tags for this story that were missed....... Cheating and Cuckolding. Since I loathe and abhor both terms, not liking seeing a good man get betrayed and fucked over, I didn't care much for it and voted a 1. Would have worked better if the husband was a real bastard asshole abusive sob. In the words of the immortal Stan Lee, 'nuff said.
by
Anonymous08/26/15
plagerism at its best
The original was much better. Actually yours kinda sucked except for the parts that were directly copied
by
Anonymous08/26/15
GREAT ! !! !
HOW SOON FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER??
DON'T MAKE US WAIT TOO LONG! ! ! ! !
Start writing
At least the first page of this story is not new. It IS a great story. If you're going to re-wrap a gift at least let us know you've changed it somewhat.
I think I've read every "mom/son fuck in the car while dad's driving" story out there. I have to say this one was one of the best. I like the twist of the two of them getting together in the hotel.
For the future chapters, try switching back and forth the point of view from the mom to the son. Hopefully we won't have to wait long for the next three parts to the series. Good luck with the contest.
Sure your story isn't original but you tell it so well. They are stories about car ride incest and maybe this story takes a few elements from another story on this site. But that's what authors do, they get the inspiration from various things and sometime, they like a story but want to tell it differently. And what's the harm?
This is a good story which is very exciting. Sure the premise is very similar to other stories (a mother having to sit on her son's lap because the car is full of luggage) but the rest of the story is different.
We can forgive an author who gave us so many (and many) original and awesome stories to not be original for once. Especially if the story is as good as this one.
You're my favorite author, so please continue to give us great stories like you have been doing for years.
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Anonymous08/26/15
Just fucking hot
good as always you didn't miss a beat ;Keep on trucking ten bears43
I love riding on lap stories and this one was very good. I could identify with the mom's insatiable appetite for cock and cum. the dialog was great and there was just the right amount of angst about what she was doing to make the story even hotter.
I love mom rides on her son's lap stories. Yours was told in a very talented way. Sexy mom is becoming her sons sex Toy, unable to resist as her son takes her over and over again. What a great combination, the sex drive of a 40 year old woman and a 20 year old man are the perfect match. The fact that these two are mother and son adds to the beauty. This sons hard cock is getting relief while thrusting into the best pussy on earth his mothers. No condom means mommy is accepting her son's gift of seed directly into her womb over and over again. Mommy willingly slips from her husbands hotel room at night wearing her sexy nylons just as her son has ordered. I will bet that mommy is a frequent visitor to her son's college dorm, as he has her dress in slutty attire and become his mommy-slut each weekend as he fills her with his seed. Mommy and son are now addicted to incest sex and will strive to consummate their new mommy son bond with greater frequency. Thank you for a great mommy son tale.
Whenever I see a new story from you, I know that I'll enjoy it - this one was no exception! Well done. And that's tough for a story line that's been played out numerous times on this site - but you put your wrinkle and sexual personality to it and it was fun. Don't worry about any troll with a plagiarism cry - you were yourself in the fantasy. Thank you!
by
Anonymous08/26/15
I loved the story. Can't wait for more.
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Anonymous08/26/15
No, it wasn't very original, but....
...but it was hot as hell! Actually I love the concept. I'd even love being the dad who pretended not to know what was going on behind him, but got to enjoy a hot creampie at every rest stop.
... but excellent execution. I love your writing and most of your stories, and this one is no exception. Would love to read all of the potential story lines. Definitely 5 stars!
I have been scrolling past your work for months. It was simply not interesting. This was a remarkably well done piece of work. I look forward to additional chapters!
As to your posed question on where to go next, I am not an anal sex enthusiast so asking you to jump past that an go to:
Backseat Mommy: Parents' Weekend
Mom comes to visit without husband.
Anal sex is not easily achieved and a scenario of daddy in the front seat as the clandestine pair work it in behind him is too far fetched. Maybe if he cops a refer stick from a hotel Bellman and convinces her to try it while walking on a beach would add some zip to the mom in hotel room idea.
Champagne is known to make women want to dance and lose their pants, too.
by
Anonymous08/26/15
Great execution of a familiar story line.
How about some pictures like some of your other stories?
by
Anonymous08/26/15
Best Story ive read in a long time
Hi this is Brilliant not many people have done the mom sits on sons lap before its one of My Favourite topic although No on this site has ever done a Brother Sister version to this. Anyway Thankyou for making such a great story kept My imagiation going throughout. 5*Star Rating!
The story started to arouse me right at the texting scenes. It should had been hotter if it was prolonged with further texting conversations with a bit of reluctance from the mother who never knew the situation would happen. The final scenes were obviously rushed. It killed the excitement when the boy overpowers his mom.
Good story nonetheless, coming from one of the best incest story writer here on literotica. Two thumbs up.
This is what we have come to expect from your stories. Great job!
by
Anonymous08/27/15
Very Good!
A great story! Please keep more adventures coming!
by
Anonymous08/27/15
Ms. SSL outdoes even herself
This is an excellent story of hot motherfucking by one of the best authors on this site (and generous, too--check out her list of Favorites.) I love Corey's attitude. Here's an 18 year old kid who does what so many of the boys his age would give anything to do. He slides his fat young penis--lots bigger than his dad's--up between his mother's legs. He happily pumps away giving mom the best cums of her life, and blows his young balls, shooting his own mother's vagina full of his warm creamy semen. And Corey's so damn cool about it all. Mother Sarah's amazed. With dad inches away in the driver's seat, the boy "was now just sitting there reading his kindle as if his cock wasn't buried deep in his mother's box." Mom playfully chides him, "you motherfucker." Corey replies, "those are the hottest words I have ever heard." This kid's bursting with pride--he's proud of being a real-life honest to goodness down and dirty young motherfucker. I love how he keeps calling his mother "mommy." He knows that his mommy's practically in love with his young penis--hell, she fucking worships what her boy's got jumping around in his pants--and this instills him with the confidence to just shove his cock up to his balls up the same hairy hole he came out of, any old time he fucking feels like it. Corey owns his mommy's cunt, and that's just the way his mommy wants it too.
Kind of ironic considering a story was posted a day before yours of the same topic and commented how this topic has been done way too much but your take is my new favorite. *****
Im not, as a rule, a huge fan of incest stories but having read a few of your stories before I thought id have a read on. Well you certainly didn't disappoint me, the scenario and content was unique, very well written, and most of all captivated me to the end paragraph, it was smoking hot and very classy xxx
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Anonymous08/27/15
very good
I'll have to say, if the previous commentor thinks this is unique he hasn't spent much time here. I have read this story several times by several different authors. And they were all good. The son going to college, mother riding his lap, she wears a sundress and a thong, he fucks her. With minor variations that is the story. Sometimes its a big tv blocking vision and giving privacy and sometimes it is boxes but it doesn't matter. I give this a five star rating because I like it very much. I'll have to say, she takes his dick aweful fast. Not very much 'testing the waters' here but it IS your story, so you get to say how the romance speeds along.
"to the person who said I did please show me where. I almost never read lit for the reason I don't want to even accidentally plagiarize."
just look at the
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listed in the box to the right
Mom's Car Ride by AnimaInMachina 4.62 44
Sitting on My Son's Lap by retired04 4.46 277
Spring Break Wife by MajorRewrite 4.67 111
Road Trip with Mom Ch. 01 by rmdexter 4.68 29
Mom Takes A Ride by NakdSalr 4.48
and for a real variation on a theme, add the
two moms, two laps series by TxTallTales
https://www.literotica.com/stories/mem berpage.php?uid=34158&page=submissions
true it's not the military special forces, cross trained in martial arts husband, who comes home early to find a strange car in the driveway story. But, it is a well travelled road. (pun intended).
English
A Couple Tags Missing
I counted at least two tags for this story that were missed....... Cheating and Cuckolding. Since I loathe and abhor both terms, not liking seeing a good man get betrayed and fucked over, I didn't care much for it and voted a 1. Would have worked better if the husband was a real bastard asshole abusive sob. In the words of the immortal Stan Lee, 'nuff said.
plagerism at its best
The original was much better. Actually yours kinda sucked except for the parts that were directly copied
GREAT ! !! !
HOW SOON FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER??
DON'T MAKE US WAIT TOO LONG! ! ! ! !
Start writing
Nice
Loved this story !
Retread
At least the first page of this story is not new. It IS a great story. If you're going to re-wrap a gift at least let us know you've changed it somewhat.
I think I've read every "mom/son fuck in the car while dad's driving" story out there. I have to say this one was one of the best. I like the twist of the two of them getting together in the hotel.
For the future chapters, try switching back and forth the point of view from the mom to the son. Hopefully we won't have to wait long for the next three parts to the series. Good luck with the contest.
Very good
Good luck in contest, this story gives you a great shot at winning .
Great story as always
Sure your story isn't original but you tell it so well. They are stories about car ride incest and maybe this story takes a few elements from another story on this site. But that's what authors do, they get the inspiration from various things and sometime, they like a story but want to tell it differently. And what's the harm?
This is a good story which is very exciting. Sure the premise is very similar to other stories (a mother having to sit on her son's lap because the car is full of luggage) but the rest of the story is different.
We can forgive an author who gave us so many (and many) original and awesome stories to not be original for once. Especially if the story is as good as this one.
You're my favorite author, so please continue to give us great stories like you have been doing for years.
Just fucking hot
good as always you didn't miss a beat ;Keep on trucking ten bears43
Author's Note
Hi all,
Is the idea original...no... that said I tried my take on it.
Did I plagiarize... no.
And to the person who said I did please show me where. I almost never read lit for the reason I don't want to even accidentally plagiarize.
Jasmine 2015
awesome!
I love riding on lap stories and this one was very good. I could identify with the mom's insatiable appetite for cock and cum. the dialog was great and there was just the right amount of angst about what she was doing to make the story even hotter.
5*s
Hell Yeah
Can't wait for more chapters, Hurry !!!
Great story
I love mom rides on her son's lap stories. Yours was told in a very talented way. Sexy mom is becoming her sons sex Toy, unable to resist as her son takes her over and over again. What a great combination, the sex drive of a 40 year old woman and a 20 year old man are the perfect match. The fact that these two are mother and son adds to the beauty. This sons hard cock is getting relief while thrusting into the best pussy on earth his mothers. No condom means mommy is accepting her son's gift of seed directly into her womb over and over again. Mommy willingly slips from her husbands hotel room at night wearing her sexy nylons just as her son has ordered. I will bet that mommy is a frequent visitor to her son's college dorm, as he has her dress in slutty attire and become his mommy-slut each weekend as he fills her with his seed. Mommy and son are now addicted to incest sex and will strive to consummate their new mommy son bond with greater frequency. Thank you for a great mommy son tale.
Awesome job
You've done yourself justice with this one.
BTW, I'd love to read those potential storylines you outlined.
Nice long chapters for each of them.
Your stories are always enjoyable!!
Whenever I see a new story from you, I know that I'll enjoy it - this one was no exception! Well done. And that's tough for a story line that's been played out numerous times on this site - but you put your wrinkle and sexual personality to it and it was fun. Don't worry about any troll with a plagiarism cry - you were yourself in the fantasy. Thank you!
I loved the story. Can't wait for more.
No, it wasn't very original, but....
...but it was hot as hell! Actually I love the concept. I'd even love being the dad who pretended not to know what was going on behind him, but got to enjoy a hot creampie at every rest stop.
Cute and entertaining
I really liked it!
Common Plot...
... but excellent execution. I love your writing and most of your stories, and this one is no exception. Would love to read all of the potential story lines. Definitely 5 stars!
yes
Do all three chapters
A REASON TO RETURN TO READING YOUR WORK
I have been scrolling past your work for months. It was simply not interesting. This was a remarkably well done piece of work. I look forward to additional chapters!
As to your posed question on where to go next, I am not an anal sex enthusiast so asking you to jump past that an go to:
Backseat Mommy: Parents' Weekend
Mom comes to visit without husband.
Anal sex is not easily achieved and a scenario of daddy in the front seat as the clandestine pair work it in behind him is too far fetched. Maybe if he cops a refer stick from a hotel Bellman and convinces her to try it while walking on a beach would add some zip to the mom in hotel room idea.
Champagne is known to make women want to dance and lose their pants, too.
Great execution of a familiar story line.
How about some pictures like some of your other stories?
Best Story ive read in a long time
Hi this is Brilliant not many people have done the mom sits on sons lap before its one of My Favourite topic although No on this site has ever done a Brother Sister version to this. Anyway Thankyou for making such a great story kept My imagiation going throughout. 5*Star Rating!
Good and bad.
The story started to arouse me right at the texting scenes. It should had been hotter if it was prolonged with further texting conversations with a bit of reluctance from the mother who never knew the situation would happen. The final scenes were obviously rushed. It killed the excitement when the boy overpowers his mom.
Good story nonetheless, coming from one of the best incest story writer here on literotica. Two thumbs up.
Great story
Once again you do not disappoint.
Loved it
Although not original, the spin on it was.
I want all the sequels
need something in 9 months to remember him and the trip, let's do it !!!!
Make her belly swell !!!
number 3
Parents Weekend: Mom comes to visit, without Husband.
Fuckin loved it!!!
Need all the sequels, it's so fucking good!!!!
Great story 5*s
This is what we have come to expect from your stories. Great job!
Very Good!
A great story! Please keep more adventures coming!
Ms. SSL outdoes even herself
This is an excellent story of hot motherfucking by one of the best authors on this site (and generous, too--check out her list of Favorites.) I love Corey's attitude. Here's an 18 year old kid who does what so many of the boys his age would give anything to do. He slides his fat young penis--lots bigger than his dad's--up between his mother's legs. He happily pumps away giving mom the best cums of her life, and blows his young balls, shooting his own mother's vagina full of his warm creamy semen. And Corey's so damn cool about it all. Mother Sarah's amazed. With dad inches away in the driver's seat, the boy "was now just sitting there reading his kindle as if his cock wasn't buried deep in his mother's box." Mom playfully chides him, "you motherfucker." Corey replies, "those are the hottest words I have ever heard." This kid's bursting with pride--he's proud of being a real-life honest to goodness down and dirty young motherfucker. I love how he keeps calling his mother "mommy." He knows that his mommy's practically in love with his young penis--hell, she fucking worships what her boy's got jumping around in his pants--and this instills him with the confidence to just shove his cock up to his balls up the same hairy hole he came out of, any old time he fucking feels like it. Corey owns his mommy's cunt, and that's just the way his mommy wants it too.
wow
great story cant wait for sequals
You are impressive
I love your stories and I'm never left disappointed. Just keep on writing please.
Backseat Mommy Ass Fucked!
:)
Waiting For Series To Continue!
ALL Your Writing is Awesome! This is The Story You Weren't Going To Write! Would Have Been Our Loss! Incest Is Best! LOL!
Meh
"Two Moms, Two Laps, Two Hours" still sets the standard for mom-on-son-lap-car-ride stories.
In comparison, this story lacks passion.
Hot!
5/5! Got me soooo wet!!! ;)
So hot
Definitely 5 star.
loved it
Waiting for the next episode eagerly
Sequel Definitely
Please write all 3 incest tales
Amazing
Write all 3 sequels
fantastic
don't stop now. fantastic. the trip to see her son in college will be eventful I hope.
A minor mystery...
There are silk stockings (which you love) and there are nylon stockings. There are probably cotton and woollen ones too. But what are silk nylons?
What, No Patriots jokes?
More
Please write all three sequels. This story was very hot!
That was hot
Kind of ironic considering a story was posted a day before yours of the same topic and commented how this topic has been done way too much but your take is my new favorite. *****
fantastic
Im not, as a rule, a huge fan of incest stories but having read a few of your stories before I thought id have a read on. Well you certainly didn't disappoint me, the scenario and content was unique, very well written, and most of all captivated me to the end paragraph, it was smoking hot and very classy xxx
very good
I'll have to say, if the previous commentor thinks this is unique he hasn't spent much time here. I have read this story several times by several different authors. And they were all good. The son going to college, mother riding his lap, she wears a sundress and a thong, he fucks her. With minor variations that is the story. Sometimes its a big tv blocking vision and giving privacy and sometimes it is boxes but it doesn't matter. I give this a five star rating because I like it very much. I'll have to say, she takes his dick aweful fast. Not very much 'testing the waters' here but it IS your story, so you get to say how the romance speeds along.
ssl: to answer your question
"to the person who said I did please show me where. I almost never read lit for the reason I don't want to even accidentally plagiarize."
just look at the
Similar Stories
listed in the box to the right
Mom's Car Ride by AnimaInMachina 4.62 44
Sitting on My Son's Lap by retired04 4.46 277
Spring Break Wife by MajorRewrite 4.67 111
Road Trip with Mom Ch. 01 by rmdexter 4.68 29
Mom Takes A Ride by NakdSalr 4.48
and for a real variation on a theme, add the
two moms, two laps series by TxTallTales
https://www.literotica.com/stories/mem berpage.php?uid=34158&page=submissions
true it's not the military special forces, cross trained in martial arts husband, who comes home early to find a strange car in the driveway story. But, it is a well travelled road. (pun intended).
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