by SilverMuse
.... So obviously in love with Diana.... I hope this one has many more chapters!
I have never left a comment before, but I must say I love this story! I hope you continue it. I'd love to see how the rest of the summer goes, and what happens when they go to college.
I think this story has gained a large number of admirers because a) the sex scenes are hot and seem so real that readers can place themselves into the action and b) the characters seem real, with their individual personalities and biases - in other words, 3 dimensional instead of actors participating in sex. More, please, and personally, I am rooting for Ian - seems to be a "lovable cad with a good heart".
I actually would never consider plot as a plus when I'm on this site...but I want like... a novel with these three. I read somewhere this was a two-part series, but I'm sure you would have an audience to how the rest of the summer unfolds, especially with Ian. Please write more! This was so sexy and managed to get really dirty without isolating me as a female reader as so much of the content here does. Not too vanilla but not abusing some poor girl either. You have a real talent for good smut.
Completely agree. Plot is surprisingly an added benefit. I think you're good at this! I feel like there's some competition where she'll have to pick a brother and it'll turn into some extra cheesy romance where she makes Ian good or Brenden makes her better. I don't know.. Something! Looking forward to more!
I really hope to read more about these three. Hot scenes plus characters I am actually interested in would make for a great book. Personally I'd prefer if she doesn't choose between the brothers. I'd much rather have them all together!
Whooo. Hot stuff. Love it. Especially the oral. I totally want Ian's tongue on my clit too...
I am enjoying this series. It is a great story and keep writing. You are one of my favorite writers.
I would pay for your stories. I hope u get published cause you deserve to !
I'm revisiting this series after having originally read it when you were still churning it out, and it's just as great as I remembered it to be. Arguably my favorite story of all those I've read online (which are a lot). I agree this could - and perhaps should? - be a published story. In any case, thank you very much for this delicious and wonderful read, I wish you only the best! :)
All those wanting more.. please refer to the authors bio page... she has expanded and published this series as well as written an entire sequel! Both available on amazon.
Silvermuse,
My deepest gratitude for your time and energy in writing this enthralling series!
OMG I think I’m in love with Ian. Not sure if I should continue reading or fantasize my own story.
Great writing!