All Comments on 'Duplex Ch. 12'

awesome chapter, I can't wait to see the next one. I hope its not another month of waiting. Great job!

Good another chapter. First I must say I don't have like Helen part of story much, but rest is very good. Can't wait to another chapter and what will Edie do with him.

I'm really enjoying the story so far. I wonder if the babysitter wants to take him on a road trip.

This is one, absolutely brilliant piece of work!!! As I said before, it's my ULTIMATE FANTASY! It's like you wrote my own mind!

This SCREAMS (!!!) for more chapters! I am litterally refrashing your profile just to see when the new one (Oh, oh oh... Dear GOD! may there be more!), come out...

I won't lie, I read in this site for years. By far, this series is the one I enjoyed the most. THE MOST. And I read A LOT and enjoy a lot. But the pleasant way you present this awesome, shameless tale, is just captivating.

I raise my ale for you mate!! I certainty won't mind you writing 50 more chapters!

exactly my words. I hope next chapters will be soon. this story is best. it has everything

Please continue it! Very HOT!

hope this was no end

What happens next i cant wait to read

This is the best stories here. I hope we will get more chapters soon. With more, spanking and nude time for Jason. And also with more playing with his bare butt. Maybe more outdoor nudity will be good. Maybe he and Mary on wallk in park or beach. He naked like in day when he was born. She full clothed. Maybe thy visits some shops near beach he still naked.

Pleas write more chapters.

thank-you Mr.NBIncali for this fantastic story. Every sissy alive wishes he had a Mary to serve, I certainly do.

In this vein . Very difficult to write a sensible ending .

Please continue

Loved it, thanks

awesome.

Oh this tale has to continue!

This is an amazing story. More chapter please!

I absolutely loved this series. It's now one of my faves. Bravo !

Bummer for the author to leave this story on such a massive cliffhanger. Oh well, guess I'll just have to use my imagination to figure out how that conversation between the two mommy doms would've played out.

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I honestly felt like the anal sex teasing was drawn out too much. One of em should've nailed the protagonist with a strap on already, honestly.

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I also felt like Mary was a bit inconsistent. She's possessive of him, yet she's fine with sharing him with others. Probably something that could've been elaborated on in future chapters, too bad the story is abandoned. Everything else was top notch. The spanking and all.

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3/5 for the whole story. It'd be around a 4 thus far, potentially a 5 given a good ending, but since this is clearly an abandoned series, I can't go higher than a 3. Pity. I hope the author decides to return and finish what they started, but seeing how long its been since the last chapter was published, I won't hold my breath.

What an Amazing story 😍😍😍😍. Lots of potential left to explore. Thanks!!!!!