I suggest you find a proofreader for future stories. There were several painful little grammar goofs that ruined the mood for me somewhat. I'm a grammar Nazi, but still. The story itself is superb, though. :)
I love it. This was fun, light and a quick pleasure.
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I suggest you find a proofreader for future stories. There were several painful little grammar goofs that ruined the mood for me somewhat. I'm a grammar Nazi, but still. The story itself is superb, though. :)
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I love it. This was fun, light and a quick pleasure.
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