All Comments on 'Santa Baby'

by sum12watch

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Archangel_MArchangel_Malmost 14 years ago
Excellent, but...

I suggest you find a proofreader for future stories. There were several painful little grammar goofs that ruined the mood for me somewhat. I'm a grammar Nazi, but still. The story itself is superb, though. :)

Dale Jane HenpartyDale Jane Henpartyabout 7 years ago
Santa as a lustful on call sex worker

I love it. This was fun, light and a quick pleasure.

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