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All Comments on 'Dragon (S)Layers Ch. 41'

by T_Silverwolf

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
A good problem to have:

Your writing is excellent, which makes the small error(s) stand out.

Easily-confused words: reign (royalty) / rein (horses).

T_SilverwolfT_Silverwolfover 8 years agoAuthor
Ah!

Oh, bugger. Thanks a bunch for the comment (seriously, thank you!) and the note. I was afraid I'd missed some things.

Thank you again and I hope you enjoy the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

I love the way you describe the combat, it's technical, raw and bloody. This assassin and the plated draconic acolyte are amazing.

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