All Comments on 'Witches Brew Ch. 03'

by reneelove

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
The problem with this mess?

Is that there is no consideration given to consequences and no one seems to fight back. Seems unrealistic, even for a fictional story. No stars.

mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 8 years ago
Nice work, reneelove.

I am really enjoying this -- thank you for sharing it with us, and please have five stars.

@Anonymous: Have you ever considered taking the sex and travel option?

MasterfuljimMasterfuljimover 8 years ago
Mel

How could he possibly know about sex and travel, stuck in his bedroom with only his PC for company waiting for mummy to bring him his din dins. Neither activity have ever featured on his repertoire.

EmeraldSolitaireEmeraldSolitaireover 8 years ago
We need more of this one

We really do

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Please continue, these are great!

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