All Comments on 'Cat Nipped Ch. 01'

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KhasyKhasyover 8 years ago
Bad

Don't switch from third person to first person mid chapter. Fix it and it might be readable.

jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenover 8 years ago
They switched?

I hadn't noticed. Too caught up in a good story for it to derail me.

wolf9696wolf9696over 8 years ago
5/5

really liked it

ericsson113ericsson113over 8 years ago
Sweet Holy Hell Thats Hot

Even with the 3rd to 1st person change, this has become one of my favorite stories. Keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
just one small correction

It's'chaise longue' not 'chaise lounge'. It's French.

Other than that, I stopped reading as soon as it became anal. Personal preference. Sorry.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Loved it

I also missed the perspective change.Section was to hot for me to care I guess

rockyraccoon35rockyraccoon35over 8 years ago
amazing!

Very well done, this style of futa is very rare for some reason. This needs to be more than a couple chapters, series material for sure. Keep up the great work.

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