All Comments on 'My Massage'

PDumble, if you have seen your e-mail you will ahve read my comments on another of your stories. This is about the same standard as that story, given you a good vote. Do you see my point? You could just as easily have replaced these two characters by B&S.

Will's

PDumbledoor,

Basically a good story, but the extensive use of elongated utterances (ooohhh mmmmyyyyy!, etc.) detracts from the tale.

Another improvement would be to place less emphasis on the mechanics and more on the sensations and feelings experienced.

I love this story I would like to see more of it

more stories of black women and white men please.....

I like this story bcoz i felt this in my own life also

we need more like this

This story was certainly sexually stimulating, but didn't earn as high a rating as it could have. The therapeutic massage being administered by one friend to another suddenly became totally sexual without warning or explanation. That would happen only in a far-out fantasy, not in real life. As a certified massage therapist, I've given hundreds of clients standard massages that very slowly became sensual, applying increasingly erotic strokes on each part of the body to steadily arouse the clients' sexual anticipation. I'm retired now, but I still give sensuous massages to everyone who asks. I no longer charge for the sessions, because I so enjoy watching the recipient's reactions as he or she approaches and finally achieves an intense sexual release. Despite my one criticism, My Massage was a well-written story, sure to stimulate many readers. I look forward to finding more massage contributions by author PDumbledore here soon.

who doesn't love a bit of interracial fun ;)

that was hott and satisfying even to my mind :>)

I concur with that review. Still, in spite of those points, I love this. I really like the fact that they're friends, too.

Could do with a little editing, especially on the looooooong words in the dialog, but still a five.