The Visitor

faithful but horny wife

Guest in sexy cunt of wife is best

They all liked it...but...

They all liked it, so no problem in there...but the friend being a dominant man wouldn't let it be a one time experience...The other thing that didn't feel right was this couple still in theirs 20's already need to spice things...However a usual story for LW...2*

thanks for the flashback

sure can recall several late night parties when most guests had gone.. enough said

a slut whore is a slut whore no matter how many rings she wears

now that it has begun may he and she enjoy her STDS and HIV

cucks and sluts.

So when does hubby get his fantasy of another woman, or was this his gay fantasy also. What happens when ole Dave calls the slut up or tells everybody at work about this. Another stupid story that would ruin a marriage not make it better.

1 star!

Not one good thing in this story!

People Can be So Stupid

Why are all you Anonymous people so pissy? If you don't like wives fucking other men, why are you reading "Loving Wives" stories? Just because YOU don't like it does't mean others can't enjoy, if that's what they all agree to. I myself never thought I would be into it, but my guy and I have been exploring this a bit and its very hot to us. This author isn't telling you what to do in the bedroom, just writing a story for enjoyment. And yes, some people find it hot. That said, this story is like a 3-1/2 stars for me - as the sex was good, but needed to be longer and pay off a bit more. It also needed an editor- a few misspellings always drive me a little nuts, but a nice overall story.

She felt "proud" of herself?

Okay this is fiction. But even fiction has to be in touch with reality to be either plausible or interesting or entertaining. These are disgusting characters. Doing implausible, ludicrous things. And talking such ridiculous dialogue that I had to laugh at how bad it was. What was fun to read here? No stars.

More BTB and Consequence stories!

@ Anon Because there are a lot of consequence and BTB stories in LW and the % of these stories decreased recently!

love the story

hope you continue the story.

Bla Bla Bla...!

100.000.000 times read here the same old stupid stuff. There is no fantasy and creativity - only stupidity and unimaginativeness with these authors.

VERY, VERY HOT!!!!!!

Why are all you Anonymous people so pissy?

Ya mean like you?

"Just because YOU don't like it does't mean others can't enjoy,..."

I wonder if, as you were writing that, if there was a glimmer of realization that the same concept could be applied to you. Just because YOU like it doesn't mean others have to like it. You like it? Fine. Others don't like it? Fine.

After going on and one, slamming others for not liking the story, only then did you actually say anything about the story. They, on the other hand, commented on the story.

If they're pissy, what does that make you? It makes you a hypocrite.

Most erotic story I've read in LW in quite a while.

This is the most erotic story I've read in LW in quite a while. There are plenty of spelling and other gramatical errors in this story, but from reading your other stories, I know you can do better in that regard...please do so from now on. I gave you five stars based entirely on it being the most erotic story of the day.

Dumb Story**

Wasted my time and I did not even finish it.

love it

Reminds of years ago with my wife & my friend Johannes.4A

Love it

Loved this sexy story. Got my dick hard as hell. Felt good playing and reading. Keep it and us up!

Cleaning Dave

I love the story and I'd love to be the one cleaning Dave

I've been bad and need to turn myself in...anyone want to punish me? add me on �kyp3 babydollsarah182

Outstanding. You've certainly earned five stars.

Hot!

Loved the story, well written and sounds so true and did I say hot?

Loved the story....

One of my favorite fantasies ... stopped too soon, though... :)

more losers

enough said

Hot

Made me hot

Chapter 2?

Very good story. Sure hope there is a Chapter 2 in the very near future. Very HOT!

Love it

Yet another hot story, I really enjoy reading and jacking off for you.

husband is not straight, he sucked another guys cum.

So what kind of man likes this stuff, bi or gay, someone who would rather watch than fuck his wife, someone with no pride or self esteem, someone who doesn't care that everyone he works with will know what kind of man he is. Ya I can see how this would excite some of you.

Amazed

First -To those who left negative feedback ONLY because you don't like this type of story: WTF is wrong with you? If you don't like the content, DONT READ IT!!! If you must, at least give feedback on writing style, grammar, etc.
Second - If you really don't like it, WHY are you reading stories in this category? Why do you continue to read when you realize it's a topic you don't like?

My Comment to the Author: HOT!!!

Hey bkln_40

Tell me rocket scientist. How you can tell if you like a story without reading it? Guess what moron? Is your the only opinion matters What a dumb ass.BTW I guess you like slurping another man's cum out of your wife don't you Putz

WTF

is wrong with you people that get off on this trash. Bunch of fucking sickos. This author doesn't write anything but trash.

H O T

I have fucked my wife once after a black man filled her with his cock and loads of cum ,, It was the best fuck of my life ,, so slippery and smooth ,, Would like more times if she would ..

Great story! Keep writing and ignore the moral police who read and then get offended. Love your style. I've played both roles, bull and cuck, but prefer cuck. It is much more sexually satisfying. If you can take the negative feedback have hubby suck her and her lover clean. That is when true submission starts. When he finally takes hubby in the ass while he cleans his wife it is totally complete. I am not there yet but my wife's lover has fucked me privately. He says she will understand but I'm afraid of the risk. We practice safe anal but the thought of her watching him fuck me is too nerve wracking. We can't go back from where we are now but ...

Why?

The more and more gay people step into the publicity to admit they are gay. Why do not the cucks and hotwives step into the publicty to admit they are cuck-hot wife couples? 47F

Aroused

"This author doesn't write anything but trash," said the comment. Oh, yeah! I'm going right to your hot author page and read more!

Behind the kitchen counter was a nice cerebral element.

very sexy

Great story. It got me very hard and horny

Thanks. That made me laugh.

It's been a busy day. Needed that.

Needs work

This is a popular theme. My feeling is that if the wife is willing, there is no conflict.
Most stories have some sort of conflict. Even James Bond, whose adventures have so many gadgets, is always on the edge of a disaster.
It would seem more believable to me if there is some sort of coercion; some reason for the wife to go along with this. This is the cusp of the story; why would she do it?
That is your job as the author; to come up with a believable plot.
Let me know if you rewrite it.

Anony needs a rape story

I find it amusing that the most recent anon is upset it isn't more of a rape story. The wife is uncertain, but goes along because she's turned on and he's upset that she wasn't forced. I guess that says all we need to know about his fantasies about women.

Okay

Okay imstillfun, three times in one night is too much for me from reading your stories lol. I'm too old and need to sleep haha, loved it. 5 again, 😊

Good short story

For a short story you squeezed a bunch in. 5 from me but while it is a common fantasy to share as my wife and I do, there is a bit more emotional struggle coming from a first time sharing.

1*

usual shit from another WHORE "author".

Hot

Silly negative comments! I loved the story! Lots of detail stuffed into such a short story. Hope there will be more coming!