All Comments on '"Andi" Challenges to Triumph Ch. 02'

What a well written story. I love how the sex and incest is so secondary to the actual story. your depth of character build up, originality, and overall ability to place us in the middle of your stories world is superb.

Thanks and please continue with the wonderful story, Tony. <:/)

A very well written story. Can't wait for next chapter. Thanks

This is a 5/5 story, keep it up.

More ,give us more. awesome story

You have made my body tingle and brought a tear to my eye, beautiful sensitive writing , can't wait to read on. Thank you.

Holy shite , batman! Whadda scene!

I must say, your writing style is one of the best. Thank you.

I absolutely love the slow build up

Well still full of great descriptions, Ī'm waiting for mummy and daddy to appear and take turns with the kids, stupid I know….