All Comments on 'Elixir of Passion'

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visioneervisioneerover 8 years ago

Beautiful imagery that is both graphic and sensual. Nice poem.

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 8 years ago
Liquid lust oozing from my thighs ........

To

My juices glisten on your lips

That entire stanza is to die for !!! 5-ed !

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Thank you

@Ashesh9

Thanks for the feedback

sweetcaressgentlewhispersweetcaressgentlewhisperover 8 years agoAuthor
Much appreciated

@visioneer

Glad you enjoyed it.

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