All Comments on 'Adele Undone'

How about Adele goes home gets a shower and goes out for dinner only to return and find her boyfriend at home with Melanie.

Or how about a threesome where the boyfriend takes it in the ass too!!!

Enjoyed it.

Adele was surprised when she was confronted by a female who turned out to be a he. She/he sure satisfy her fantasy.

Melanie is definitely going to keep Adele all weekend, put cum into every opening of her body, keep her screaming and moaning until her voice is hoarse, and return her sore and exhausted to work on Monday. Monica will figure out what happened and tease her about it until Adele breaks down and then Monica will take her home after work to sympathize, which will lead to a very long night.

Twist: Monica knows Adele and calls Adele to join her in enjoying their new conquest.

...for what it's worth. NO MORE CHEATING!!! Adele either breaks it off with her BF, or he joins in. I'm really not sure which direction I lean.

I am a guy who dreams of a girl like Melanie, though my fixations are entirely oral. HMMM, imagine swallowing that! Sucking and swallowing loads of cum from beautiful shemales has long been my biggest fantasy.

Please continue the story along any vein your creativity takes you! Seduction is the most powerful sexual expression. I'm married to a very strong, very successful woman who's the unchallenged head of our household. But meeting and being overwhelmed by an aggressive shemale is my darkest fantasy. Thank you for sharing this lusty story.

How about as soon as they are finished, Monica is standing there stroking her own cock. Monica and Melanie keep her all weekend and then she moves in with them. Sex all the time, either with Melanie, Monica or both of them.

I loved this story, it was excellent, and it got me really hot.

More chapters , definitely. but I'd like no cheating whatsoever. I wish you write a chapter with adele and melanie as a thing. Good story. cheers

Hello everyone,

Thank you for taking the time to read my story and providing all your feedback. I do see that there are some comments here that say Adele should not cheat. Well too late. She has already cheated on her boyfriend. This story will move forward because of the fact the Adele is conflicted. She has now had the taste of transsexual cock and one that is bigger than her boyfriends. So against her better judgement, she is going to keep going back to Melanie. I dont know where this story is ultimately leading to at this point, but the cheating is a major part of what will cause the conflicted emotions.

Very hot story believable even. Would love to read more.

Looking forward to the sequel. Will Adele wake up one morning to discover she's begun growing a cock of her own?

That was mindnlowing, it got me masturbate all night... Give us more

That was hot.. Thanks you.

Amazing story and the pictures are of such quality, even to the detail of Melanie's tan lines, simply incredible. You are a great author and a fantastic illustrator. Keep up the good work.

Please continue with this story. Your thoughts and ideas are intriguing.

Your story was so convincingly hot. It made me wet, so wet. I have masturbated several times over the story and the darling drawings. It would be the best of both worlds....to make love to a woman.....with a real cock that splatters my face. Mmmmm. Love you.

Madge (with Toni) and Kristen

I offloaded to this one.. So fucking hot

Waiting on the next episode!!

I fucking love hfernandez1983. He's a genius

Great story MORE please with pictures and longer

A further series of chapters with Adele cheating on her BF would be great, then wind him into the story

Instead of the usual story add that Monica set the whole thing up for her Mistress Melanie. Then evolve it from that starting point.

Adelene needs to get involved with one of the girls in a torrid lesbian affair as she becomes a complete SLUT!

Love this story, so please continue it!!!

Been waiting for a long time! We need the sequel to this story!

Not sure if I want to be Adele or Melanie!

Sequel please!!!!

Great story, keep it going

You have to Keep story the going

Melanie needs to meet the bf and take him too!

Made me super excited and hot. I want to bend over and get fucked by both of them.

All of us followers want more. Me too, such a talented writer. Liz33nd

I am so wet right now. Oh I want to fuck a she make with a big cock and big tits! Please! God this story has me fingering myself wishing I was Adele

Fuck yes! Write anoter chapter, and have Adele's asshole be fucked hard and stretched wide open by Melanie's huge she-cock.

Such a hot story and the drawings pushed me over the edge. I love strong women and strong trannies and have submitted to both.

Very Hot!!! Love Shemales especially with huge cocks

More PLEASE !!

Great start

Incredibly Erotic.