All Comments on 'Starters Only'

excellent...very well written...a good example of patient story telling and use of detail. jordon really sets the stage...thank you.

what a great read. yes, there has been distractions and it whetted my appetite...

more great stories!

JordonLynn, you have created a character that I have fantasized about. I often observe straitlaced women who seem prim and proper and imagine what firey passions they supress deep within. Your characterization and depiction of Diane is superb. There are many women who do not get the opportunity to fulfill the passion and desire they keep locked up within for fear of ill judgement. You have illustrated to us what happens when such a woman does let go of her inhibitions. I have so much more to say but for now I'll conclude with a heartfelt " Thank You"

This is probably the best writing I've read on this site. Your vocabulary, description, the way you developed your characters... All EXCELLENT. Amazing work. Looking forward to reading the rest of your stories

You are a truly gifted writer of erotica Jordon. To paint such a plain picture at the beginning is almost like daring a reader to go away. I mean really, six toes? HA! But under the drab newspaper wrapping you have sprinkled in tidbits of brilliance. Certainly enough to keep an intelligent person's attention. Your passage

" I am a firm believer that laying in wait beneath this superficial exterior is where the human sexual animal lives and breathes. A woman’s libido lays within her mind, in her heart, in her enthusiasm. In a woman’s willingness to accommodate and please a combustible ecstasy awaits those with the will, and the skill, to pry open that Pandora’s Box of fiery lust." Is so right on. And the following sentence about the male libido is exact as well.

I plan on reading all of your story's (this is a particular kink of mine, both male and female) and these words truly satiate my thirst.

Thank you again!

at every opportunity of white men we see on this site

This was a great start. I met an old student six years after he graduated UVA, we had a wonderful evening together, I hadn't given a blowjob in a car in years and never to a black. Several weeks later the stars aligned as did his hard black cock with my pussy.