All Comments on 'Losing My Balance Ch. 03'

That scene was soooo intense...!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter...!! I'm totally hooked to this sweet aching build up between the characters..!!! Keep scribbling HeartnSole!! Cheers!!

Loving the storyline please don't take too long until the next chapter xoxo

Keep up the great story. You have me intrigued as Harmony Haze story had me waiting for the next chapter. I did not think I would find another story to read that had me ready to read more so soon.

Thank you

Looking forward to the next chapter. Please don't keep us in suspense :)

Peachy my ass! A little short but still good :)

I had to read it twice. I think I held my breath the entire time I read it first it was so fking intense. I have nothing constructive to say - I normally hate one page chapters but the way you structure it and your quick delivery of chapters (no pressure :-) ) - I can't complain. The chemistry and desire between these two are building and building and I think its going to be insane when they connect. Thanks for this rainy Sunday morning gem.

Please post the next installment soon. My heart literally hurts from the sudden discontinuation. It is fabulous though.

But it would be more awesome if it had a couple more pages next time.

There's nothing wrong with the length of the chapter, quality over quantity.

It had everything you needed it to have, I enjoyed it thoroughly :)

Loved it can't wait for the next one. Again I enjoyed the ending. :D

Great story so far. It leaves me hanging waiting for next chapter. Can't wait for next chapter. Keep up the good writing. It really grabs you and keeps your attention. Very well written.

SB

Damn I was hoping the next chapter would be up by now

please dont leave us hanging.. please dont leave us hanging!!! cant wait to read the next chapter... :D

Thanks everyone for all the lovely comments!

I was aiming for intense, so it's glad to know that it got across ;) I've been a bit busy, but have no fear, I'm chipping away at the next chapter. I won't leave you hanging!

xx

*cheers at news progress on the next chapter* :D

this is a good story, I think Bee is trying to get her best friend into bed, will her bff go for it, we will see

Great story