by oggbashan
Nice well told story. Hope for a second part, what happened to the other genies that are freed? Also nice Bible reference by your pen name.
Absolutely Outstanding! A real story, and with NO errors, grammatical or otherwise that I noticed, and very, very sexual while entertaining as well. WELL DONE!
Ogg King of Bashan - You are a real Giant.
I have enjoyed every of your stories very much.
Thank you
D.S.
I don't usually give 5 stars and I know I don't look for grammatical errors I enjoyed your story thoroughly and if you happen to make another chapter all the better for us readers.
Thank you again very much
A pleased reader
O, I genuflect to you and the inspiration of your genius loci for generating this genre-breaking, null-generative writing of a genie and a gentile gingerly learning to generate love with generalizable genteelly genitals.
...and didn't spot what you were worried about on first reading.
Good luck!
refreshingly different to the standard I banged my mom junk that is churned out on lit on a daily basis.
different, enjoyable and refreshingly pleasant natured. Thank you
This is the first time i have read this genre, congratulations for a wonderful story.
Firstly it is a complete story, a true rarity in genie stories on Lit.
Secondly that the genie is not the usual slavishly submissive.
Thank you for a good read.
And the best description of true love I've ever read! Selfless, caring only for the welfare of your Love; your joy is giving her joy. I look forward to reading more of your work.
This could fit into so many different categories it is fun to think of the possibilities. Romantic? yes. Mature? very. Was there a cheating wife? in the past, but definitely. Erotic? indeed. Fantasy? enough for any man (or woman?) Even a touch of Sci-Fi, BDSM, and fetish.
You took the genre and made it your own. You created the rules and lived within them. All while crafting a delightful and humourous love story jam packed with vivid imagery. I must admit a bit of jealousy, of your skill as a writer, and of the melding or joining Genie and Sam experienced when they wed. We should all be so lucky to experience that togetherness with our life partner.
Thank you.
What a fun and delightful tale. If someone wanted a good tale to make their day better - this is it. Thank you!
That this is a beautiful story that will make your day and put a smile on your face. Thank you!
I have enjoyed reading Genie stories, but this one was different, and I enjoyed it very much. I liked the twists that aren't usual. Good writing, good story, and I come away with a good feeling, which is important.
It was so interesting with no predictibilty to it. No idea where it was going to go next. Thank you for such a warm, loving and erotic tale.
An enchanting, entertaining, cheering bit of light-hearted whimsy
A hidden gem that I am very grateful to have found! Thank you for sharing this with us!
The invention here is brilliant. Most genie stories—even female genie stories—play with the myth and titillate, but here the myth is extended and an idealized form of sexual union is invented. Brilliant.